Amazing work. :~) (+1)
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in discussion Staff Processes / Staff Policy Discussions » [VOTING] What To Do With Bright's List
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Oh crap, I thought I changed it.
I love the tone throughout the piece. The ending made me gag a bit 0-0 (+1)
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » Plague's Proposal
I can't say it better than this. I'm seconding everything in this.
I really like this proposal.
in discussion Writing Help / Help: Drafts Critique » The Stars Shine Brightly (SCP)
An SCP about sinkholes and sins. ~2500 words. I'm looking for some feedback, as this is a new draft. I hope its horror enough!
Some concerns:
- I hope the dialogue sounds good
- Does the story/plot come through enough?
- SPaG
- anything else!
http://smlt.wikidot.com/cubeflix:sinkhole
Thanks,
cubeflix
This is Apollyon, but it's rated Keter?
seemed interesting, but it looks like it needs a rewrite
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » Plague's Proposal
I said it when I read it in the draft stages and I'll say it again here: I love this proposal.
It does not strive to be grand. It does not strive to be a giant, world ending threat, or a mystical unfound society, or a some super complicated concept. It is instead, at its heart, a simple story, and one that is exceptionally well written at that. This piece has some of the best characterization on the wiki, especially pertaining to the O5s. Every single one of them feels distinct and real, with noticeable quirks and ideologies all made known SOLELY through how their dialogue is written. I especially loved Thirteen, all of their lines were extremely well crafted and humorous to me.
Speaking of humor, this article has a lot of comedy laced through it, and I'm very happy to say that the majority of it landed for me. Some jokes fell flat, and others didn't hit too hard, but for the most part pretty much every comedic beat here worked for me, which only served to further engrain the piece as wonderfully enjoyable.
The writing here in general is just superb, and definitely reflects well on you as an author, Plague. You did and amazing job here.
in discussion Staff Processes / Staff Policy Discussions » [VOTING] What To Do With Bright's List
Vote 1: Should The List be Deleted?
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Vote 2: Should any other action be taken by staff beyond the deletion of The List?
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| No. No action beyond deletion | 3 |
| Yes. Replace the page with some sort of warning or message. | 2 |
| Yes. Replace the page with a new list featuring a new character. | 1 |
The mental image that the MTF log produced was hilarious. +1
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-7791
in discussion Staff Processes / Staff Policy Discussions » [VOTING] What To Do With Bright's List
Vote 1: Should The List be Deleted?
| Yes | No |
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| X |
Vote 2: Should any other action be taken by staff beyond the deletion of The List?
| Option | Preference |
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| No. No action beyond deletion | 2 |
| Yes. Replace the page with some sort of warning or message. | 3 |
| Yes. Replace the page with a new list featuring a new character. | 1 |
It's the literal translations of what succubus and incubus means, cubi comes from the Latin "to lie" (as in on bed) with su being derived from sub "under", and incubus from incubare "to lie on top of".
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » Plague's Proposal
NO FUCKING WAY NEW PROPOSAL
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-6155
Hard agree with the above comment regarding the confusion of -3’s relation and their reaction in the interview. Not only that, but the interviews are littered with grammatical mistakes (missing commas, weird ellipsis and punctuation) of the kind I would fix but it feels like a rewrite. Aside from that the dialogue is clunky, and the ending is very anticlimactic for me; “they’re stuck like this for now and sympathetic researcher is warned” isn’t an uncommon trope and so if makes me feel like I’m missing something.
While I’m downvoting, the premise and everything up to the interviews got me hooked. It do with a rewrite tbh.
Finally. +1.
Well, I have no words for this.
Thanks to ExiAsWell for giving me the motivation to make something. I enjoyed making it, and I hope somebody enjoys reading it. Take care!
-RB
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » Antimemetics Division Hub
We never had an Antiemetic Division, what the hell even is an Antimeme?
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » Herman Fuller Presents: Peter Cottontail's Cotton Candy
Dr. Doofenshmirtz voice If I had a nickel for every time Herman Fuller tortured a living creature made of candy and sold parts of them during the show, I'd have two nickels, which isn't a lot but it's weird that it happened twice
+1
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