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KenomaKenoma 19 Mar 2024 08:36
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-8001

Frieren: Journey's End

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π•Žπ•™π•–π•Ÿ π•¨π•’π•π•œπ•šπ•Ÿπ•˜ π•’π•π• π•Ÿπ•– π•šπ•Ÿ 𝕒 π•›π•¦π•Ÿπ•˜π•π•– 𝕠𝕗 π•₯𝕣𝕦𝕖 π••π•’π•£π•œπ•Ÿπ•–π•€π•€, π•₯𝕙𝕖𝕣𝕖 𝕒𝕣𝕖 π•₯𝕙𝕣𝕖𝕖 π•₯π•™π•šπ•Ÿπ•˜π•€ π•₯𝕙𝕒π•₯ π•”π•’π•Ÿ 𝕀𝕙𝕠𝕨 π•ͺ𝕠𝕦 π•₯𝕙𝕖 𝕨𝕒π•ͺ: π•šπ•Ÿπ•€π•₯π•šπ•Ÿπ•”π•₯ π•₯𝕠 π•€π•¦π•£π•§π•šπ•§π•–, π•₯𝕙𝕖 π•œπ•Ÿπ• π•¨π•π•–π••π•˜π•– 𝕠𝕗 π•Ÿπ•’π•§π•šπ•˜π•’π•₯π•šπ• π•Ÿ, 𝕔𝕣𝕖𝕒π•₯π•šπ•§π•– π•šπ•žπ•’π•˜π•šπ•Ÿπ•’π•₯π•šπ• π•Ÿ. π•Žπ•šπ•₯𝕙𝕠𝕦π•₯ π•₯π•™π•–π•ž, π•ͺ𝕠𝕦 𝕒𝕣𝕖 𝕝𝕠𝕀π•₯.

by KenomaKenoma, 19 Mar 2024 08:36

Seeking Greenlights: Yes

Page Type: SCP Article

Genre (Optional): Horror, comedy?

Elevator Pitch: An anomalous bagel appears in a site cafeteria, and it's one and only effect is that anyone that sees it or is told by anyone that also knows about it, in any way, has an intense and irrational fear of this bagel. A fear so great that anyone affected thinks this bagel is the highest possible threat to them, they don't know what it does, but they know it could easily end them and maybe the world. (Even though it won't, it's just a normal bagel)

Central Narrative: The story of this bagel will be from the point of view from a researcher affected by the bagel. They are attempting to write an SCP article on the bagel while under its affects, its written in a rambling/crazy way and the addendums turn into a day by day account of what they are witnessing. That won't be the main article, but just a document inside the SCP article made after the event.

Additional Notes (Optional): It's going to be a neutralized SCP, but with the mysterious nature of how it appeared, could mean that another one could show up. Also, I am currently working on my second draft with 5-6 friends peer reviewing it, I just wanted to go fully through official means since this is my first ever article.

SkeletonInAFridgeSkeletonInAFridge, to better help the author here, can you elaborate? Your current review is rather generic and could essentially apply to any critique thread in this forum, without clear indication of whether you read the material or not. What specifically did you think was interesting about the concept? Why? Do you think any changes need to be made? Why or why not?

For more information on giving critique in this forum, please see this thread: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-9804362/so-you-want-to-be-a-concept-reviewer

Critique Team - Captain Post by ZynZyn, 19 Mar 2024 08:20

I missed this post last month—moving forward, feel free to poke a staff member via PM if there isn't a timely response on something like this.

where the evaluation of the content being AI-generated appears to just be "the vibes were off"

I find that I'm in agreement that more proof should have been recorded for this particular case, as quoted portions or screenshots in the O5 thread. That said,

I'm more just concerned that a Vibe Check Committee with powers to indiscriminately kill any article with Bad Vibes, absent any comment from the author on the use of AI.

For the case linked, the author self-deleted the pages that were reported in IRC before evidence could be recorded. This is noted in the thread, and as such the reason why the user received a warning and no further action.

hey just checking in and confirming that the complete absence of proof in any of the logged and prosecuted examples of AI generated writing on 05command is absolutely bonkers

For all the threads (as far as I'm aware) logging staff responses to AI-generated writing, there is at minimum quoted portions of text from the article(s) in question that contain common hallmarks of LLM/AI-generation. Other proof included in threads that have that additional information for collecting are comparisons between sandbox content and author comments' typing style (for some cases, sandboxes contained pre-AI-revisions of base article text, or the prompts fed into the AI were present). Additionally, some authors will confirm they used AI, such as with this case: https://05command.wikidot.com/forum/t-16748957

If more proof beyond this is needed, can you provide some examples of how to structure posts so they do not appear as just a "vibe check"?

for example:

With regards to the thread linked, there was no response issued beyond a post in the discussion thread of the article asking if the author used AI. I have now moved the thread to the Non-Disc Record forum category, as there was no warning, revoke, or ban associated with the case.

i would not call this 'standard' by any stretch of the imagination

+1 perfectly horrifying

by GuigGuig, 19 Mar 2024 07:43
Re: Book? by HarryBlankHarryBlank, 19 Mar 2024 07:37

Locking this thread as it's presently discontinued. Author, when you would like to resume work on this draft, you may create a new thread.

Admin Post - Info - Closed by ZynZyn, 19 Mar 2024 06:50

So glad this is still around on the site.

I still love the wizard fight at the end.

+1

Take this upvote.

by SleazeCinemaEnjoyerSleazeCinemaEnjoyer, 19 Mar 2024 06:29
AwhRyanAwhRyan 19 Mar 2024 05:41
in discussion Per Page Discussions / Per page discussions » SCP-8550

The dialogue just doesn't feel normal. This isn't how I expect any regular person to talk, especially with the hope of containment.

by AwhRyanAwhRyan, 19 Mar 2024 05:41

Some of the supplemental materials for 55555 make me wonder if the in-group are the ones under 3125's sway, if it's involved. The willingness of the in-group to consider genocide… brrr.

by starlitsundaystarlitsunday, 19 Mar 2024 05:30

Now that you and Djoric mention it, that simplistic element could need some more work. Well, I guess that’s pretty easy to fix, isn’t it? The three last points with more buildup, character for 999 and story for SK definitely is. I’ll get to work now. Thanks for the help.

Re: There is a good idea here. by Vict0rVict0r, 19 Mar 2024 05:07

Adorable. Honestly adorable article, loved the characterizations here with the staff and GOI member. Adding this to my list of fun recommended reads.

Catching up on 8Kon by FernlomFernlom, 19 Mar 2024 04:39

This sounds like a wish spell gone wrong, or incredibly right depending on which side of the DM's screen you are on. Cure for your incurable disease? And you specified by removing the disease from your bloodstream? Sure thing.

There's a number of SCPs that seem to fill that kind of niche. I'm wondering if there can be a link between their origins. Someone with a sadistic bent doing "favors" for the desperate.

Nothing says that this is specifically an anti-HIV thing, that's just the dread disease our minds leap to. Bad blood has been blamed on a lot of ills throughout human history. Today we take it more metaphorically but that wasn't always the case and healers weren't very effective.

Sad that the picture was removed, but i still really like this SCP.

Take this upvote Clef.

by SleazeCinemaEnjoyerSleazeCinemaEnjoyer, 19 Mar 2024 04:34

Since this thread has been on the listing for a week without a reply yet, this is a quick general information post from staff for the author. If you are still seeking feedback on this material, please remember to contact reviewers directly to request critique (if you haven't already reached out).

This thread has information on reaching out to reviewers: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13282692/how-to-get-more-reviews

If you have already contacted multiple reviewers and received no reply, feel free to ask a staff member for assistance finding a reviewer.

Since this thread has been on the listing for a week without a reply yet, this is a quick general information post from staff for the author. If you are still seeking feedback on this material, please remember to contact reviewers directly to request critique (if you haven't already reached out).

This thread has information on reaching out to reviewers: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13282692/how-to-get-more-reviews

If you have already contacted multiple reviewers and received no reply, feel free to ask a staff member for assistance finding a reviewer.

I understand and respect your personal feelings and the effort you put on this article, but since this is a collaborative writing community that aiming for better writing quality, personally I didn't get the point of this article, unfortunately. Although I do think this article has a huge potential and could've done better than current version. So -1, sry.


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by Lambda CoreLambda Core, 19 Mar 2024 04:18

Plot-hole? Nah. Just an opportunity for a future writer.

by CODENAME LayeredfaceCODENAME Layeredface, 19 Mar 2024 04:04

Can't believe I missed this one until now!

+1 by CODENAME LayeredfaceCODENAME Layeredface, 19 Mar 2024 03:56
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