So this came from an idea I had after reading a comment on another SCP. Thanks to Eskobear for his help with the hook, and Echo and Azzleflux for their help in refining my draft. Of course thanks to all the residents of #site19 and #area14 as well as there are almost too many names to list off that helped me with various parts of this.
I like the article, but I don't see why must the foundation have an “hazardous materials suit” standard. You could replace that whit a description of the suit.
I disagree, but have an (what I think is informed) opinion on the issue. Specifically, there is no such thing as a "class 3 hazardous materials suit." Instead, I think the Foundation would go by (and in-universe, likely invented) UN standards: Level A: A goddamn spacesuit (not really) that protects wearers from all gases and liquids that can't break the suit or in any way compromise its integrity; Level B: a suit that protects from liquids and provides breathing air; Level C: in layman's terms, a gas mask and clothing to prevent extensive exposure. (There's a Level D, but it doesn't count because you might as well be naked.)
In regards to the article, the people responsible for containing this thing would know which is which and how to use them. However, I don't see why the containment specialists would need HAZMAT protection, because the article doesn't explain how the SCP spreads.
Edit: Ignore that last sentence, I had a stupid.
I've edited it to class B containment suits to better fit a real system(rather than my made up one).
Also the "routine reduction of accumulated SCP-2313-1 instances" is strange. If SCP-2313 effects spread only by direct contact and SCP-2313-1s are successfully contained no new individuals will be affected except from D-class personnel involved in tests, that will normally be terminated monthly.
I like the payment idea, that makes this stand out. That said, why did you put those audio logs in the middle of the description? That could stand with some formatting changes. I'm really not feeling the final note, either.
Not really engaging me. The goofy HR department kind of takes away from the otherworldly nature of the article (I'm guessing that the entities' use of "sentients" implies they're something other than human), and without some idea of what these things are doing with the sensory capabilities they're purchasing, I'm not terribly interested.
I'm completely f*static*g interested. I love this. I want to know so much more. Tell me more, Doctor Cimmerian! +1
Dang, I liked this. Personally, the impersonal HR guy upped the creepiness of this for me. It provided a reason for the anomaly (profit? spreading "employees"?) without actually supplying any answers. It's great. It speaks volumes through implication.
The voice acting was decent (I especially liked the little bit of Southern twang that crept into his voice when he spouted the rehearsed phone number. Very authentically call center-y) and everything sounded good. I agree some more attention could be paid to how the contagion is spread, maybe acknowledge the horror of people being spontaneously struck deaf and blind. God, how do you cram a confused, newly blind and deaf person into a hazmat suit? Ugh.
Either way, though, this was an easy upvote for me.
Agreeing with the post above - transcript and audiofiles in the middle of passage is way too absurd
You need to put that away in addendum or something.
I don't really get what's happening; is some anomalous company 'loaning' other's hearing and sight for the sake of other blind and deaf 'customers'?
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Given that it is implied that several of the original instances of SCP-2313-1 were SCPF employees, its likely that there may have been some more drastic attempts to cure the personnel of infection on the part of the foundation's, such as use of SCP-2077 to circumvent the effects. I'm guessing such antics likely didn't work, since the [Static] Company likely plays for keeps. As such, I am recommending the following edit:
Changing this:
SCP-2313 is a sensory disorder that prevents stimuli from the visual and auditory systems from being properly processed by the brain. Sufferers of SCP-2313, referred to as SCP-2313-1, display the symptoms of blindness and deafness. Excluding auditory and visual stimuli, SCP-2313-1 instances appear to process all sensory perception normally.
To this:
SCP-2313 is a sensory disorder that prevents stimuli from the visual and auditory systems from being properly processed by the brain. Sufferers of SCP-2313, referred to as SCP-2313-1, display the symptoms of blindness and deafness. Excluding auditory and visual stimuli, SCP-2313-1 instances appear to process all sensory perception normally. Attempts to circumvent these disorders via any means, including use of SCP-2077 has so far been met with failure.
If anyone has other/better examples that could be used here please leave a comment saying so!