The Spilling Cut

Summary:

"And from it flowed unceasing"

The Spilling Cut

Rush 06 Aug 2014 19:12

http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/rush

I actually came up with this as an object in a RP game. I've sat on it long enough. Be merciless with critique and suggestion. I know it needs work.

Re: The Spilling Cut

(account deleted) 06 Aug 2014 19:40

To be honest, this article seems bland and uninteresting, it seems like a thing what makes you fight good. Here is a tip: instead of trying to think up a "kinda creature" or a "sorta object", think of a story that you want to tell, think of little moments in everyday life that make you think, and try to bring the reader to that same moment. I think that you are trying to put some kind of backstory into this - which is good. I would recommend that you read through the available SCPs and read through the guides.

STAFF POST - CLOSED

(account deleted) 06 Aug 2014 20:21

I've seen you copy-paste the same critique four times today in response to different articles. Spamming the forums with generic criticism isn't helpful. Don't do that.

Re: The Spilling Cut

Rush 06 Aug 2014 19:48

I wanna capture the sense of dread that the D-class must have felt. Any thoughts on how to draw that out more?