SCP-117 / Discussion

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MisterFlames 01 Mar 2010 03:08

Okay, this is vaguely unsettling, especially with the results on healthy people being good old [DATA EXPUNGED]. But still, Keter? Really, now. Keep it in a drawer, and it's Safe. It may be sentient, and might desire to be useful for that, but it's not like it can leave its case and come and get you.

Just don't have it within a hundred miles of the Broken God, and think carefully before showing it to SCP-914. 343 only knows what the Very Fine setting would do to it.

Dr Caldwell 02 Dec 2010 03:45

Totally ask him about it.

Uncandescent 06 Jul 2012 05:17

How is this still a thing.

Boa Noah 06 Jul 2012 05:21

Well this isn't too useful or OTT at all.

Communism will win 20 Jul 2012 08:20

I… like this in a weird way I guess? A tool that does anything by draining away the metals from your body interests me in a way I can't put my finger on. I can't upvote it because massive tone issues, but I wanna see something like this done better.

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(account deleted) 09 Nov 2012 13:49

I would like it better if it somehow retained the metals it had already taken, so it wouldn't just suck them out of your body every time you used it, only when it was deficient in a metal, so to speak. Because as it stands, it just seems like an item what's useful no wait its pointlessly harmful too.

I would like it better still if this had tone that wasn't awful.

Drewbear 10 Sep 2012 23:28

Agreed w/ Scantron. I like this concept, but it really needs some tightening up.

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HLewis 14 Jan 2013 07:21

Requesting permission from original author or person-of-authority to spruce up the clinical tone and formatting of this article.

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RJB_R 31 Jan 2013 03:05

Please take the time to read, rate and comment this article, it should be given more attention

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General Harland 31 Jan 2013 03:28

Looking at it, I like the idea, but I think it is in dire need of some touch-ups, both aesthetically and content wise.

There's some weird phrasing in some places, a few spots that toe the edge of proper tone, a single sentence addendum that just says "look at the thing under this," the Situation-Tool Produced log could probably use a proper table, two needles cross-references, the numerous notes at the end don't add too much, etc. etc.

I won't downvote it, but I'm hesitant to upvote in its current state.

EDIT: Also the location of recovery is clearly Tallahassee, Florida. I don't think the blackbox serves much of a purpose if you can determine what's under it that easily.

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zoombini 22 Oct 2013 15:21

Too much [DATA EXPUNGED] and too much cross-references.

TheHoodedTeddy13 12 Dec 2013 15:21

I can just imagine, that if tested on 682, it would either dispense a white flag, or tabasco sauce.

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