An anomaly based off a dream a friend described. Thanks for the inspiration, Cosmic Catacalysm.
Thanks to crit from Uncle Nicolini and
Rounderhouse for helping refine this.
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Really cool concept, I think this has potential. The newspaper looked good and contributed to the article. Especially liked the reference at the end.
However, there are some formatting and other issues that should be resolved before it is mainlist worthy. (i.e. before I upvote it)
may be allowed to pass any legislature
You mean legislation?
MTF Omicron-3 is authorized to widely administer K-class amnestics only in the event
I've never heard of K-class amnestics, and it doesn't seem like this situation would need them. Wouldn't mass-dispersal of Class-A aerosol amnestics work fine instead?
Tornado resulting in SCP-3526 event 02/26/1990.
The auto-expanding nature of the image is distracting and doesn't add to the article. I think you should add it to the top-right corner like other SCP articles. Also, you need to credit the source of the image.
Interviewed: Officer Steven McCoy
Please don't center-align the interview, it's hard to read.
Subject administered class-B amnestic
Class-B
Officer Mulvaney is survived by his wife, Elanor, and sons Taylor and Nick.
Officer Peterson is survived by his brother Cody.
This part of the newspaper article doesn't fill out the entirety of their lines. Find some other filler to pad it out.
The following document is translated from Latin and was recovered in poor condition. Portions of text which have been recreated from context have been indicated.
I don't think this should be center-aligned.
▼ Show Document
Given this isn't cognitohazardous or classified, I don't think it should be in a collapsible. You should just have the yellow RAISA box above a quote box. Even if you want to keep the collapsible, you should move it out of the yellow box, it doesn't belong there. Additionally, the journal is centered when it shouldn't be.
for our Emperor Gaius Julius Caesar Augustus Germanicus.
I don't think a guy writing in his personal journal would write out the full title of the current emperor. I would replace it with "Emperor" and add a footnote telling the reader who the emperor was at the time, or just "Emperor Caligula". I originally assumed you had confused Caligula for the original Caesar.
Also after the article has survived for 24 hours you should add Omicron-3 to the full list of referenced task forces.
Thanks for your feedback, i've fixed up the formatting issues. I've decided to keep a few of the stylistic elements you mentioned intact, though I changed the way the image zooms so it should be significantly less distracting now.
FROM HELL'S HEART I STAB AT THEE, NEPTUNE!
I enjoy articles about weird little anomalies, and history bonuses are always a big plus for me.
The only thing that I think it is missing is a few [DATA EXPUNGED], [REDACTED] or ██████.
That would add some mystery to the article.
But, due to the other details, it is an upvote for me.
I clicked only for the name too but was underwhelmed. It's a funny enough idea though that I won't downvote. The image of an officer pointing a gun at a tornado and screaming at it to get on the ground could make a fine -J.
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