(account deleted) 10 Nov 2018 04:18
Short, sweet, and simple. Though I think you interchanged a 1995 and 1996 here and there.
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(account deleted) 10 Nov 2018 04:18
I reread a few times and I don't think I see anything out of place - If you want to tell me specifically where you think, I want to make sure it gets fixed
This was a cute, simple, and attention-grabbing SCP. I liked it. Test -E with D-2386 broke my heart :,(
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Nice and to the point. I like that the belief it causes anomalous mental instability seems like the foundation over- thinking things. A card that tells you irrefutably who loves you is psychologically powerful enough to mess people up mundanely.
And despite all the other thousands of unpleasant scps, erasing someone's love out of academic interest might be one of the most monstrous things the foundation has done for a while. Room 101 would approve.
You had me hooked on the connection between the two D-Class in the last few tests. I was seriously connected to the two of them, and the reaction of the D-1995 when they didn't see the other's name on the card really hit a chord with me.
But the ending ruined it for me. I find it a bit hard to believe that a D-Class could escape surveil from a guard so easily and manage to get inside the containment chambers of 4095 so willy-nilly. I know there's no canon, but I really just find it hard to believe. The whole "write in blood" trope is just the cherry on top of what made me downvote.
I think that if you took out that last part about D-1995 escaping, the final testing log would be a far more hallow ending to the piece; that would make me feel genuine remorse for the D-Class instead of "oh no they died".
I myself actually wasn't very into that ending, but a few reviewers told me they didn't feel any urgency with regards to the plot. The point of this SCP, in my mind, was always going to be the emotional turmoil the Foundation was willing to inflict on people. I'm strongly considering deleting the incident log now that you say so, and I will if others second this opinion as well.
D-1996 made this request repeatedly for 3 days.
This 1996 should be 1995, no?
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