Carroll #055: The Workshop / Discussion

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Author Post

RockTeethMothEyes 06 Nov 2018 01:17

Chicago Spirit is looking for new business grounds, and they found a Wonderous pair to manipulate cooperate with!

Thank you to my collaborator Uncle Nicolini for approaching me with this article and inviting me to be a part of it! This was a nice way of stepping out of impartial tone for a bit.

Thank you to stormbreath and DarkStuff for their critique! (Special thank you to DarkStuff for the creation of Wonder World!™. I love this canon so much.)

Thanks to JackalRelated for the initial edit on the building photo and DrShine for the final edit!

+Image Attribution

Image 1 - Building: Taken by me, RockTeeth.
Image 2 - Chester: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:African_American_scholars#/media/File:William_Hooper_Councill.jpg
Image 3 - Maria: https://www.flickr.com/photos/library_of_congress/40935481854/in/album-72157690775854080/

Last edited on 06 Nov 2018 06:19 by RockTeethMothEyes Show more

Re: Author Post

Uncle Nicolini 06 Nov 2018 01:36

Hooray!
I wanted to write a Chicago Spirit format for a while, and after working with DarkStuff to make the Wonderful World canon I also wanted to explore the history of Wondertainment.
Put two and two together, and boom.

I can't thank RockTeethMothEyes enough for helping shape this up.

Elenee FishTruck 06 Nov 2018 01:43

Oh boy, that ending! The implications from that ending alone are enough to make me upvote, and I certainly wouldn't mind more Chicago Spirit formats around here. +1

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Mm Mm Good

JackalRelated 06 Nov 2018 02:59

whoever did that staircase photo get my congrats

oh wait it's dr.shine +1

DarkStuff 06 Nov 2018 06:10

The first article set in the origins of Wondertainment, as outlined by the canon hub! Nice! I like the characterisation here, and I hope those pictures of Chester & Maria stick. They’re great visuals for the characters.

Beyond that, does the canon, Wondertainment, and the Spirit justice. +1 for a good story

Genshed 06 Nov 2018 21:37

A very good job of building up tension and then releasing it in a thematically satisfying way.