Baptism of the Wandering Jew by Johnny the Son / Discussion

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american post

UraniumEmpire 18 Oct 2018 20:51

Tied in a knot
But I'm not gonna get caught
Calling a pot kettle black
Every song's a comeback
Every moment's a little bit later

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Thanks to psul for cutting this down by about 3k words! Thanks to Wilco for providing such great writing music! And thanks to me for finally finishing this!

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… and I'm not Robert Frost.

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Re: american post

Uncle Nicolini 18 Oct 2018 21:30

"i need to finish my oct tale"
- UraniumEmpire, except she said it a million times over the course of the last five days

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psul 19 Oct 2018 06:46

I still think that you could cut at least another 3000 words from this and end up with something better, but what's there remains very good. Veronica is a well-developed character, and it will be interesting to see whether she ever gets much in the way of catharsis through this series!

LilyTide 19 Oct 2018 13:21

I have already said how much I adore Veronica. I don't think I need to restate that.

In every one of your stories you have an abundance of respect for the other contestant's OC. You figure out what makes them truly memorable and then you emulate that in your own work. I love it. I cant get enough.

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Underrated

Lauren Bardallis 07 Jul 2021 06:48

This is a fantastic standalone tale, as well as a great way to showcase the perspective of someone battling the anomaly. I was not sure if it was a reveal that she had DID or if she was constantly changing her persona in an attempt to get to know herself? Could be the difference between her actually being related to Anna vs the "monkey on her back" being a truly separate entity

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