I'm gonna work on punching this up a bit, make it better.
The biggest issue with this one is that it's too similar to SCP-071
We don't need two succubus-type SCPs
It's true…and the pretty SCP girl who lives off semen seems like a send-up for a erotic fan-fiction. not saying there's no hope for it, but our other succubus is pretty darn good…i'll be interested to see what editing can do.
Same message as before. You're going to get a PM shortly with further information.
I think I need to reconsider my life choices..
Done. About the only thing I kept was the concept of a succubus raised by nuns.
How come you're the only one immune to her charm? I don't get it.
If she was raised by nuns how did she get her semen?
Sweet! More Clef/Satan hints. A "nice conversation about her mother" indeed.
So, a few questions about this one.
1. Why is it Keter? Euclid I can see easy as day, but she herself is not particularly dangerous. She can turn men into dangerously obsessed sexmachines, a'ight, but she's not particularly hard to contain, not actively hostile, and nowhere do I see it mentioned that she's stronger or faster than your average adolescent.
2, Class B 'suite'? Really?
3. Contact with the abbey? I don't see why this would be allowed for any reason. Seems like we'd do best to Class A the shit out of both the nuns with memories of 166, and also whipe 166' memories of the abbey, if we can.
4. Priests aren't allowed to jack off.
I'm not saying it's 'bad', per se, these are just some issues I see that could potentially need adressing.
They're allowed to jack off. They're just not allowed to have help, generally, though depending on your parish some priests are allowed to date and even marry.
But I don't know if I want to click the link or not!
So, looking over this, I've got a question.
Why was the agent who was referred to 166 in England concerning containment for Brazilian Surgeon Crabs? Was that an old link to something else?
I can see why each SCP should stand alone, yeah…
Talked it over in the chat, and the old 098 was some sort of satanic horror that had been hastily deleted. Removed the reference from the article.
What is her effect on:
eunuchs?
blind men?
pre-pubescent boys?
If I had to guess, eunuchs and prepubescent boys would have no reaction. No sperm production, no need. A eunuch who had sex beforehand might be affected, though. Old memories…
Blind men, hmmm… no vision means they wouldn't be struck by her, but there might be secondary effects going on.