ERROR: Field Cannot Be Lloyd / Discussion

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Ayers 12 Oct 2018 00:44

My first ever tale.

SCPS Included: Shaggydredlocks' 001, LillyFlower's 001, and MaliceAForethought's SCP-3856.

Thank you Pilzening & MrPines for crit!

Image Credits:
'red sun' by Thomas Hirsch CC BY-SA 2.0 (modified)

EDIT: Oh yeah I did the only one survivor as well as the sunrise one. I also did the no character mentions Halloween.

EDIT II: oh yeah you can hover on the image

Last edited on 12 Oct 2018 07:40 by Ayers Show more

MaliceAforethought 12 Oct 2018 07:24

This is amazing. I'm biased, obviously, but there's no part of it I don't love: it's clever, it's well-written, it ties together multiple elements of canon in a way I'd never even considered before, and it uses one of my articles.

Well done Aers, happy halloween, and good luck in the contest :)

Ayers 12 Oct 2018 14:09

When I saw "only one survivor" I instantly thought "Lloyd"

Thank you for the kind words!

Uncle Nicolini 12 Oct 2018 12:39

This needs more votes.

IAmTheOoga 12 Oct 2018 13:33

Real good stuff

burnerpyro 12 Oct 2018 13:37

This is really awesome. I never thought about two proposals existing in the same universe at the same time, but this story takes that idea and makes it into a very interesting tale. Very clever, and opens up a whole branch of ideas that creators can use in their own tales. +1

Very Nice

Genamako 12 Oct 2018 17:06

I had a concept for a tale like this detailing the events leading up to "When Day Breaks." Mine more or less followed the week before the event occured but this one was rather well made! My personal belief of the canon is rather similar to this tale too. The writing of it was pretty solid albiet a bit bland in some areas. The characters, while not too in depth and rather 2 dimensional at times, were pleasant for the most part. Overall I enjoyed this.

Loved it!

CoffeeCannon 13 Oct 2018 23:06

I mean, I saw it coming, but I love how it ties in the other 001 proposal and actually twists it into something more sinister (if I'm understanding correctly). By actively getting everyone outside and helping along the situation, the foundation is damning even more people to the sun. But I guess it's worth it for Lloyd stability?

DrRedacted smith 16 Oct 2018 12:46

I was sorta confused at the end until I saw SCP-001, it was the best part

Mark Penrice 18 Oct 2018 22:43

Clever way to twist the "one survivor" thing … I mean, everyone else also stays alive… but if they all end up melting together, who's to say where Lloyd ends and any other human begins? They ultimately end up as a single, massive hivemind…

But who is Sam?

edit: also that mouseover is both clever and subtle, how did you get it to animate both ways?!

Last edited on 31 Oct 2018 04:51 by Mark Penrice Show more

OriTiefling 30 Apr 2023 19:27

This is one of the coolest uses of the image feature I have ever seen. Good shit.