SCP-2016 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page SCP-2016.

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Recette 23 Feb 2014 23:29

There's a SCP-X in the containment procedures. That aside, I like it.

DeviantDharma 23 Feb 2014 23:32

Fixed.

weizhong 23 Feb 2014 23:34

I really enjoyed the evolution of this one. It was fun to see how it developed over time from a really "tell-y" kind of story into what it is now, and I'm glad to have been a small part of the process.

DeviantDharma 23 Feb 2014 23:37

You were a big part of the process! I wouldn't have made it without your help!

TL333s 23 Feb 2014 23:39

I don't want to mean this as criticism of this article in particular, but I'm getting really tired of objects that affect dreams. Maybe it's just me, but that seems a common go-to effect and it's just not that interesting.

(account deleted) 24 Feb 2014 00:02

Overall this isn't doing a whole lot for me. TL333s has a point about dream-affecting objects, though that shouldn't be an obstacle if the article has a potent enough draw.

I respect the attempt to add some flesh to the bones here, so to speak, with the background documentation, but the "wow I'm really sad my wife died" needs a little more development and to be handled a little more deftly for it to have the impact you're looking for.

toadking07 24 Feb 2014 03:11

Hmmmm, hmmmmm. The doll throws me off because it looks like an etsy listing, but the story that is woven here intrigues me. I like the idea of some wizard figure from some half remembered dream world interacting with people, though the "gaseous" transformation of the people and the coffins I'm still chewing on.

Neutral vote of nothing for the time being.

Pudimfileh 24 Feb 2014 11:40

I'm getting really tired of sob stories in SCPs.

I was reading, and enjoying until the hook came in, and then it threw me off.

Mrjericho 24 Feb 2014 12:08

I really enjoyed this article, but I thought that the exploration log didn't really do anything for me, with the exception of the note at the end. Either way, I don't think the log detracts from the article, so I'll upvote.

Tagliafierro 24 Feb 2014 12:53

I helped a bit with this :3

HammerMaiden 24 Feb 2014 14:53

I'm not really thrilled with this. The similarities to SCP-1230 are kinda killing it for me.

scrubs2009 24 Feb 2014 20:29

I'm trying to think of a serious comment besides "Great work +1" but all i keep thinking is "OMG ADORABLE GANDALF!!!!!!!"

(seriously who do i have to kill to get one of these?)

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