I liked it particularly the interview
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I love a good humanoid. The interview feels believable, and I feel sorry for her because she's the unfortunate vector of a bizarre force beyond her control, but the article itself keeps the cold, clinical tone while telling a very human-feeling story, and *inarticulate squeeing noises*.
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Well shit. Didn't see that coming.
if your reading this your gay
Good job, but I have a couple of questions.
What happened to the parents? Why not make them into the handlers of the child? If not, then maybe you could mention that they were given amnestics and are being observed (maybe mom is pregnant again…).
The child shows symptoms of anemia-what does his blood work show? Does his blood, hair, nails, sputum, etc show similar effects on people? A little more testing would be nice.
All in all, a good article. Upvoted.
I meant to imply that they believe she died in the hospital. I see now I didn't make that clear anywhere. I'll change it soon.
Hmm. Didnt think of blood/hair/ other testing. I might add that in as well.
"when a human makes unprotected skin contact with with SCP-2017"
Are there supposed to be 2 'with's there?
"is a African-American human female.'
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Hrm. I rather like this. Is this connected at all to your other SCP article? The 'place' seems to share a number of common themes with it though… not quite.
Also, super-nitpick. The name of last name of the kid is 9 black boxes, but the last name of the parents is 8 black boxes, I'm assuming that they're supposed to have the same last name.
That's actually a question I was asking myself. In universe, no. Out-universe, I actually have a dissociative disorder, and a lot of the inspiration for both articles came from my symptoms. The logs from the affected D-class in this article, for example, express a lot of what I experienced during my most recent dissociative episode. Art plagiarizes life…
As for the nitpick…well, trifles make perfection, and perfection is no trifle, huh? I'll fix it.
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