Like I said in IRC, the tweets really make this article.
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I'm not sure what the "itchy jacket" refers to, but other than that, I like this. It's cute. +1
Very intriguing, I really like the tweets. +1
I like it. Not, massively, but enough for a +1. It's not all that weird. It's not funny. It's not particularly scary, dangerous, or hard to contain. But it is fairly interesting, a bit dangerous, and reasonably weird. It feels like one of the weird things that would be sitting in the Foundation's facilities and be virtually unknown outside the relevant researchers . I think it earns a place in the setting.
I could have sworn I've seen this before, and commented on it. I think I downvoted because it makes no sense.
if your reading this your gay
Heh. It's not bad but it's not really good either. The thing is, it seems to me to be weird for weirdness' sake. I know this may be a strange criticism to make for anything SCP related, but what I mean by that is that the various strange elements don't seem to have any connection (other than the tetrahedrons trying to reach the column).
I like ambiguity but the thing is, ambiguity only works if you give the audience enough material to speculate or interpret your work, otherwise it's not ambiguous or even absurd, it's merely random and the reader has nothing to work with. And if they have nothing to work with, they have no reason to care.
It does have potential though, so I'm not voting either way for now.
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