Will some of these characters reappear?
YES.
Within The Cool War?
NO.
I really like the portrayal of the Chaos Insurgency here. Head-canon'd and +1.
I support this as well.
Also:
Isabel had been spending her morning being astonishingly productive; she had been spinning in circles with her arms out while whistling for almost four hours straight.
Heheheheheh, the Reign of Fun (TM) expands!
So… There was one guy in charge of nearly every Group of Interest, as well as the Foundation itself? And now he's dead? Sounds like a good start.
Wow
Such crosslinks
Many GOI
So universe
Much +1
Seriously, though. This is great. I love all the details about Nobody's corpse, and how Nobody controls every god-damn GOI in existence… you seem to have forgotten about the Factory, though. This is still really good, so… +1
Er, I will say this is fairly out of character for Alexylva. The names are closer to Greek pastiche, they probably don't have quite that casually official use of assassinations, and almost assuredly don't have controlled retrocausal devices. Other than that, nicely done.
The Manna Charitable Foundation received an anonymous five million dollar donation.
Marshall, Carter and Dark discovered five million dollars had disappeared from their coffers.
Heheheheheh. Ah, so great. +1