SCP-2999 / Discussion

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Author post

Fantem 07 Dec 2013 04:56

Well here it goes again. Thanks to everyone who looked at this for me a second time. Your help was greatly appreciated while writing.

Credit for SCP-2999-A's image goes to Saccstry. If you like her art, and would like to see more, here's her DeviantArt and here's her tumblr.

SCP-2999-A's text is slightly altered ASCII art created by Lee Thompson-Herbert. For the original text click below.

[+] original text

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              o       o                o      o
               o   o                     o   o
                 oo    _              _   oo
               o      (0)            (0)     o
              o        -     ,o,      -       o
              o           `^OoooO^'           o This Bunny is
              o              'o'              o Really a Celtic
               o              |              o  Knot drawn By
                 o       ,o   |   o,       o    Lee Thompson-Herbert
                   o ,     ^oo^oo^     , o
                 o     o             o      o
               o         o         o          o
              o           o       o            o
             o             o    o              o
             o               o o               o
             o                o                o
              o             H   L             o
               o          U        O         o
                o             M             o
                 o o     G          V      o
                o  o          E          o  o
              o      o   !         E  o       o
           o           o             o           o
        o                o         o               o
      o                    o     o                   o
    o                        o o                      o
   o                       o     o                     o
  oo                    o           o                  oo
 oRUo                o                 o              oLoo
 oGSDo      ooooo                           ooooo    ooEoo
 o.KIRooooooo                                  ooooooooEoo
 ooooooo                                           ooooooo

Credit for SCP-2999-B’s image goes to DeviantArt user gluki-goroda. To see more of her art, check out her DeviantArt page here.

Go give em all a hug.

And thank you all for reading! [ 0ㅅX"]

Last edited on 26 Mar 2014 19:24 by Fantem Show more

Re: Author post

thedeadlymoose 07 Dec 2013 07:04

Both used with permission, correct? (I believe you told me they were, just wanted to get clarification on the page itself.)

Re: Author post

Fantem 07 Dec 2013 07:10

Yes. I did say that -A's image was cleared, but I only recently got Stuart's.

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UglyFlower 07 Dec 2013 04:59

broken image and broken link

Last edited on 07 Dec 2013 05:06 by UglyFlower Show more

Fantem 07 Dec 2013 05:02

Dude, give me a moment to set things up. I just posted.

Sorts 07 Dec 2013 06:21

Click to enlarge.

oh HELL no

CharType 09 Dec 2013 21:25

My reaction as well.

Jogilbee 11 Dec 2013 11:54

I nearly dropped my phone.

thedeadlymoose 07 Dec 2013 07:03

As mentioned before, I like this. Really well-written, and I like the characters and concepts. I'll post more if I think up more in-depth feedback.

Boulder Smolder 07 Dec 2013 10:12

It's weird, and I like that. The characters singing took me by surprise and was a great moment.

This section of the description doesn't work for me though, or at least the second sentence doesn't.

SCP-2000-A keeps its same background image, which appears to be a young female humanoid with features similar to a white rabbit. This humanoid has its mouth covered in what is presumed to be blood, sharp teeth, and is wearing a red bow on its left ear, and is in front of a pink, spotted background with several small hearts drawn around it.

It's describing an image that we can already see in the article. If it were a photo of a physical 3D object and you were describing the object in the photo, I would understand why you'd describe the object in detail, but everything to describe is in the image, and it's always the same image. I'd say cut the second sentence for length and let the image speak for itself.

Fantem 08 Dec 2013 00:10

Yeah… You know what, you're right. Snipped.

fantam93 07 Dec 2013 13:55

I couldn't finish the article because of dat fucking picture! I MEAN COME ON MAN! I was just about to go to bed!

Cephei 07 Dec 2013 21:20

Nice use of Saccstry's art with a fascinating backstory. I love her art.

RJB_R 07 Dec 2013 21:48

Sorry I didn't get to post this, I pretty much crashed as soon as I got home last night. I really do quite like this.

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Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!

Flower on the Wall 07 Dec 2013 23:48

Animated .jpgs.
.jpgs were supposed to be the safe extension! Why?!
+1

Major Blackwood 04 Jan 2014 14:20

Which image is animated? I've been staring at both for a while now and nothing's happening.

Accelerando 04 Jan 2014 17:37

Click on the first pic. Someone got a screenshot of the extra frame of the Gif further in the discussion pages.

TL333s 07 Dec 2013 23:58

I've always liked skips made of two or more pieces connected only by a story, and this is quite a good one.

Just go tell your superior that I said a kill word, and if I say it again with someone else in the room, mute the audio before someone says it for real.

For some reason, I really liked this part, and the angle it plays in the whole thing. And I noticed a couple of typos:

Would this'll help?

cognital

regarding the probability SCP-2000-A being outside of containment

Fantem 08 Dec 2013 00:08

Got em. You thank very well!

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