As well as being abhorrent from top to bottom, I like how you created a ridiculous parasite and gave it a pretty convincing life cycle. +1
Yeah this is pretty messed up, heh. You've got a nice combination of gross parasitic lifeforms and the horror of being held to bred these things, which works well. Noticed a couple of minor punctuation issues (which I fixed because it was just quicker than noting them down), but this is good. +1.
I feel like both collapsibles could be under an addendum of sorts. Just having them hanging from the description looks kinda weird to me.
First of all, I was already grossed out at the sight of that spectacularly-well made photoshopped picture. That image is horribly burnt into my mind and I can't get it out.
Secondly, it only got worse as I read the whole thing.
This god-forsaken article is going to be the death of me. +1.
ETA: I've now developed an aversion to condoms.
Body horror and sexual squick? Well done! The photo definitely helps. I have a long standing interest in parasites; this actually has a remarkably straightforward life cycle.
The indication of what happens when the female reproductive system is not involved was most evocative.
This is really good. The reproductive cycle of the anomaly, the field log, and the way it affects the community around it. Its all very solid and it kept me hooked from beginning to end.
Practice safe sex, everybody. A fertile +1 from me.
Subject matter makes me angry, prose is excellent, 0 vote. Sorry op.
Page created: September 6, 2018… 6/9/2018. 6/9… Nice touch, that.
That was it. Wayne's roommate had come back early, and at the worst possible time. The moment was ruined - his date had taken her things and left.
"You cock-blocked me man," Wayne complained.
The discarded condom, still inside the torn-open package, lay neglected at the floor beside the bed. The words "Live Feel Plus" were visible on the side facing up.
"You totally cock-blocked me, bruh…"
But that cock-block… saved lives!!
Nice work, buddy. Good SCP!
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