SCP-3522 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page SCP-3522.

Dr Guilford 31 Aug 2018 12:44

This is actually really good! +1. The only nitpick I have is that you said at one point "non-anomalous human", the foundation doesn't really treat anomalous humans as human, and are rarely referred to as such. It seems you have a great understanding of the topic, and it looks like you did some research into the subject matter. I'm glad you put a lot of effort into this, because it showed

JoseDzirehChong 04 Sep 2018 13:16

Thank you! I did try pretty hard for this one, haha. What wording should I say other than "non-anomalous human", just "human"?

DirCat 31 Aug 2018 15:06

Third degree burns result in skin death. I think you might mean second degree burns, which result in blisters.

JoseDzirehChong 31 Aug 2018 16:09

Noted and edited, thank you.

(account deleted) 02 Sep 2018 03:35

Great skip! Only complaint would be about the SCP's character - all I know is that it's homesick, and one day suddenly became angry. Other than that great! +1

JoseDzirehChong 04 Sep 2018 13:15

Thank you! I actually had an idea to do a bit of a psych writeup as to why he got so angry. I didn't do it for two reasons:

1. I don't have the expertise to not make it an insult to mental health professionals and mental health in general

2. It doesn't really add much to the story unless his anger is anomalous too, which it's not. Some things are better left unsaid.