Breath, Pulse, Blood, Spine / Discussion

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Dmatix 07 Aug 2013 20:40

To those interested, other tales on this series can be found in my author page. Come to think of it, it might be the time to make a hub page for these.

Djoric 07 Aug 2013 20:41

Whoa.

FlameShirt 07 Aug 2013 21:12

I love the pictures included here.

_{the writing is kinda neat too i guess :P}

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Dr Clockwork 07 Aug 2013 21:13

Not bad at all Dmatix.

Once again, you create another excelling Tale.

+1

Orasmis 07 Aug 2013 22:14

That might just be the prettiest storey I've ever read on here. Kudos to you my good sir, I think this my new favorite tale.

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Dmatix 07 Aug 2013 22:15

Much obliged. I'm always glad to see people enjoying these.

Lumancer 07 Aug 2013 23:59

Your vision of the Knot, nobody, and the other aspects of this canon was always fairly muddled to me before now. This changes that for the better. I may need to go back over the other pieces, now that I have some perspective…

Dmatix 08 Aug 2013 00:07

Heh, thank you. It was always leading to this place, the problem was just which road to choose. I think this one works well.

DrSevere 08 Aug 2013 00:38

I loved this when I reviewed it and I love it now. Great job.

Doktori 08 Aug 2013 11:18

Beautiful.

FuzzyBoots 08 Aug 2013 16:40

Enjoyable. Minor typo, I think, where "One refuse to feed" should be "One refused to feed" but since it's a first-person narrative, that might be intentional.

SRegan 10 Aug 2013 11:27

A really beautiful and evocative piece. I think the images add a lot to the story as well. +1

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