In the event that SCP-#### is again located by Foundation personnel, it is to be contained in a standard 6 m by 6 m Humanoid Containment Unit
"Again"? And there's no need to capitalize "humanoid containment chamber".
This chamber is to be locked from the outside with high security electronic deadbolts
I've never heard of such a thing. Even if it does exist, does the SCP specifically need this exact type of containment?
Video surveillance is to be conducted of SCP-#### at all times, but audio is to be muted
Why not just only record video, instead of recording sound and "muting it".
without first undergoing an extensive psychological examination to determine loyalty to the Foundation
I'm pretty sure all personnel go through something like this before and during employment. Therefore, there is no need to put this here, unless the SCP itself can exploit this sort of weakness in a person.
but is not at any time allowed contact with the outside via the Internet, telephone, letters, or any such means of communication
You could shorten this into something like "SCP-XXXX is restricted from any means of external communication" or something like that.
#### is also to be provided with a means of writing, such as paper
Pretty sure you just said she can't write letters… And if you just forgot to put a "not" in there, the previous sentence made this one pointless in stating.
All documents recorded by SCP-#### are to be immediately incinerated without reading or archiving
Why give her paper in the first place if you aren't even going to research it? Does she make drawings wut keel u on sight???
As of Incident ####-██████-███, at no time is the subject to interact with D-Class Personnel.
Not allowed to do this in the first place unless during testing, but specifically only D-Class? Any other researcher can walk right up to it and start talking about he weather?
Description: SCP-#### is a19-year-old human male of Caucasian descent, 1.9 meters in height, with thick brown hair and orange tinted eyes
Unless those last two details are important to the SCP's concept, leave them out. And fix That typo in the beginning.
he cause of this atypical pigmentation is unknown at this time, but Dr. █████ theorizes that it may be due to [REDACTED].
Pointless redaction here…
In interviews, #### has frequently stated that its given name is ██████ █████, and prefers to be addressed as ██████
I don't see the point in this sentence.
Subject is amicable and cheerful in nature, and gets along well with interviewers and other personnel.
Pretty sure this isn't Keter, most likely Euclid. Keter's have much more specific containment procedures and can easily cause chaos and destruction. Though since the description isn't finished, I can't tell if this is going to be a Keter…
#### is not, at this time, under containment by the Foundation since it initiated a containment breach on ██/██/██. Thus far, all attempts to locate the subject have been futile, and an international search is now underway.
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So this isn't finished. As far as I can tell this is just a girl. That's it. No further comments.
