My phobia of insects and bugs is such that I will not be reading any of these entries, but I super dig the hub setup and the way each entry is laid out. Aesthetically pleasing. Good job, Team Cheesecake team.
Entomophobia is where this series ends. An O5 accepts defeat as his world falls.
But ever since the late July, I've been thinking of expanding this series with another thing I am developing that involves Space. So this new series will be "Insect Hell: Reach" (name is a WIP, idk) It will be about Foundation space personell coming back to earth to try to save what's left of it.
I feel that this will give a proper end to this amazing series and help bridge into another good idea I got
The locusts got to it.
(More seriously, it was probably removed. I recall multiple people saying that it needed to be reworked.)
The original author pulled it down, so I'm in the process of rewriting a new-but-same-named tale right now.
It was! I've decided to just keep the ending from the previous article instead of rewriting the old ending, since it just didn't fit. Kept it around on the hub for a while though so people'd know it originally had a different ending.
Downvote from me. Although this story is somewhat interesting, the scenario seems forced and unrealistic. How does a paramilitary organisation with so many magical items in its keeping fail to, at least double check the series of poor decisions made by two people and a wildlife company? The dialogue isn't all to good either.
For me, this canon lacks a bit of a guide. I like it detailed, but at least a short and small one on how to get into the universe without having read every article would be a step in the right direction.
(I also have the impression that the plot is already too firmly established to do much more. I would have left it an open series for everyone, because nothing really changed when it was made into a canon, but that's my taste and it wouldn't be the first canon with such a structure.)
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