Interesting. I feel it could use a little more meat, but I like it. +1
I love SCP-455, and this tale does it justice. +1
Pretty tires so only caught what may have been one mistake "Rust flakes from the floor as she throws herself against the steel,". Does rust flake from the DOOR, or TO the floor? Or did you intentionally say it flakes from the floor?
I interpreted it as subtly "wrong"; flakes of rust are forming on and floating off the floor to suggest how bizarre and sinister the physics of the boat are getting. Think the transition to the Silent Hill "other world".
This wasn't the author's intent, but I still like that idea.
I didn't know 455 existed, so thanks for letting me know about it. Holy balls is it good.
As is this. You really capture the total despair that the original conveys in just a few lines. Bit with the rescue team was excellent.
I enjoy anything 455-related, and this is no exception. +1
Definitely worthy of the source article. I like how you included so many different perspectives. I also liked the room with the human body part engine - that didn't get touched on in either of the original exploration logs I don't think, so it's cool to hear a bit more about it, gruesome as it is.
…goddamn.
Reading this right after any of the other logs is like chasing a wiskey shot with absinthe. Feels like a hyper-condensed slideshow of Tales From The Crypt endings…and that is not in any way a bad thing.
Very much +1, with regrets i haven't done so sooner…
