
I don't really care for the style, but that's more of a personal gripe. As is the painful "SCP acronym front organization dohohoho" thing.
What's really bothering me, though, is the whole notion that the Foundation uses non-Foundation personnel to research SCPs. That would defeat the entire purpose of keeping the knowledge of anomalous phenomena from society. It would also make for a horrible work environment. "Hey random research guy! You're being press-ganged into a secret organization at the same moment as having your mind broken by all the crazy shit we have! Hope you don't have any issues with that!" Your setup here makes absolutely no sense.