Salt the Slug, Sheepdog / Discussion

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Author Note

Pedantique 16 Mar 2018 12:47

It's more Maim the Sky, Slay the Sun. This one's more of a transitional chapter, but I guess it's good to flesh out a character's backgrounds sometimes.

I think the title itself is some of my finest work.

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LuckyManJohn 02 Feb 2019 19:09

You did a great job with Dhole's (home country? home planet? home dimension?) home, especially the meeting with the Exarch. Their cultural practices were alien enough to be interesting but still very understandable, so one was never lost during their exchange. Wonderful work!

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Re: +1

Pedantique 02 Feb 2019 21:22

Home dimension probably, but I haven't developed the structure of the whole setting much. I'm glad you enjoyed it though! I had a lot of fun writing the characters and their dialogue, and I definitely want to touch on the place again some time.

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Larilen 08 Feb 2019 15:49

I hope to see more of this setting, it fascinates me.