In the Manner of a Bad Apple / Discussion

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Author Note

Pedantique 14 Feb 2018 21:48

It's Valentine's Day! Does this contain romance? Who knows. Did I write it just to describe weird stuff? Absolutely!

Part of Maim the Sky, Slay the Sun.

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Grigori Karpin 01 Dec 2019 11:09

Awesome tale, enjoying these immensely

Slight correction:
“ The swordswoman pounded after her. She passed by a group of robed figures who reeked of pulped oranges, by a giant month that recoiled from her presence, and by a man in the same uniform as the woman chasing her.”

I think that should be moth?

Pedantique 01 Dec 2019 11:30

It should be indeed. Thanks for pointing it out. Wouldn’t be my writing without at least one typo slipping in.

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