Dr Dzerwhel, this feedback is vague and unhelpful.
Overall I think you could make it longer
By adding what? What kinds of details would improve this piece? How? Don't just assume that an author automatically knows what the community wants to see.
use the words for numbers and not use the (number) (#) format.
Generally, writing out the number in words is only done for numbers less than 10, unless they're measurements (so liters, meters, and not dogs, trees, people, etc.).
I don't have much else.
You don't have any comments on any strengths of the piece? Any reading recommendations for the author that they can reference as writing done well?
Maybe specify?
Why? How would that detail improve the piece?
Given that this is not the first time staff has needed to address problematic feedback from you, please endeavor to improve your critique from now on.
