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Besplatno, chto bednyĭ chelovek!
Proper translation: Free [of charge], what poor person!
I LOL'd.
Also, russian words "bend" like latin, they don't stay the same as english. Pretty much all of the excerpts are speaking in an "Ugg hunt meat, ugg no hungry now." way.
Seriously, if you can't actually speak any russian, just include the translation. You aren't winning any points by showing us you can speak Google Translatorish.
Also, wouldn't the latinization be Alexei?
Ok then. I can fix that. As for the latinization, I believe both Alexei and Alexiy are appropriate, as I have seen both used. Also, I do speak a bit of Russian, apparently it's just worse than I thought. I used a translator just to get a few words I didn't know.
I have only one issue with this, It seems that it was reclassified from Safe to Euclid because of the danger it now presents? Due to the fact that it is harmless when its toner is empty and does not do anything when no-one is within 5 meters, shouldn't it still be safe?
One other thing, Why does it have to be in an unlit cell?
(account deleted)Upvoting. This is interesting enough, and I like the change in the SCP's behavior during its confinement. One thing nags at me though; how does it know how to make the series of dangerous models like scorpions and velociraptors? It looks like it has to have seen something or had it described to it to make it.
Did the SCP's creator sit down one day with a catalogue of vicious animals and describe them to it? It's kind of an interesting thought and would explain how messed up the person who would create this sort of thing is, but I'm not sure whether any sort of exposition like that would help or hinder the entry.
There's a lot about this that doesn't sit right with me.
The collapsible previous SCP is unnecessary and largely redundant. It could be a single sentence in the revised SCP.
The Russian child personality also seems gratuitous. I think the subject would be creepy on its own without needing a creepy child angle.
As stated before, this is Safe, not Euclid. Lock it away without toner and nothing bad will happen.
Interesting concept. I would say some sentences need polishing. Drop the Russian child - a printer acting on its own is creepy enough.
+1
Actually, the child personality offers the explanation for why it's acting the way it is - from its POV, it was just trying to gain a necessary supply, when suddenly its new friends tried to kill it! Now it wants to get away, and maybe find some new friends who won't be so mean…
Exactly! If you were a 9 year old living at a boarding school, and suddenly everybody there seems to want you dead, you're going to try and fight your way out at any cost. It just wouldn't work the same way if it was just some personality-less AI.
The ending doesn't really grab me. "Oh no, it ate a guy and now it hates us." Also, how the heck can you have a testing log for something whose actual functions are level-3 classified?
The testing log is from a "Previous" version of the article.
For those who are curious, this SCP was inspired by Megaman. I liked the concept of a helper robot, but found myself translating the idea to the real world, and adding some more interesting hooks to it.
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