So this started out as a rewrite of SCP-1170 as written by McNick, but it may have evolved into an entirely new thing. Feedback would be appreciated.
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I love you
+1
Though there are some redacted that annoy me.
Living the dream, or dreaming the life?
(account deleted)"Sporting" inverted joints? A "spectre"? This writeup has tone problems.
Those were both actually left over from the original article, but fix'd. (Isn't spectre an acceptable spelling?)
Oh, yes, it's the acceptable UK spelling. However you spell it, though, "spectre" is not a particularly appropriate word for use in a technical document. May I take a whack at rephrasing it?
I got a little carried away, eh heh. (I started out just looking for the one word, but then I got hung up on some science errors…) If you don't like the changes, please feel free to revert them, and I'll go back and only edit the bit with the "spectre".
Nice rewrite. 90% of the information was kept the same, just condensed and phrased more clearly. The other 10% has given more information on the SCP instead of 100 [REDACTED]s.
I'm glad some people like the pictures, they were edited from scratch. Thanks for saving this!
That being said, could probably use a little more work. I'll look over it a few times and make a few changes if you don't mind.
The audio log makes this entry. What's with all the entries recently with strikeout text? I know it's meant to demonstrate the evolution of the document as new observations are made, but it makes things look cluttered to me. I'm not really sure how to fix it without just removing that content though, and I do like seeing that previous content. Hmmmm.
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