If this succeeds, this will be my quickest post ever. One day from concept to a page. That would be a good feeling and greatly boost my confidence as an author. Let's hope it works out that way. Anyways, this is going to be the successor to URA-1902, my most controversial piece (it sits at +32 right now but it also has 8 downvotes). Hopefully it sheds some light in places, but also deepens the mystery in others. It also serves as a means for me to plug everything I've written, so yay~!
Wowie indeed. This was a really, really good read, and held my interest just like your other work — with surreal experiences that leave you more confused than when you started. Needless to say, I can't wait to see where you take the story.
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Good read, but it definitely opens more questions than it answers. Kinda like an episode of LOST! :)
Ewwwwww
EDIT: Unless you're just trying to be creepy in a way that connects with the tale (I did use "daddy" in there but it's hidden).
EDIT 2: Wait shit "daddy" was hidden in URA-1902 not this one whoops.
Trying to connect it with URA-1902, i.e. the smile-face. It didn't go though my mind that that could be considered creepy, whoops. Don't know how to rephrase it to make it less so though. Rip. I guess i'm creepy now. :P
God, can I just say I absolutely love the concept of LaFerrier? A compliant Foundation agent with multiple of themselves. Honestly, it's the perfect excuse to have an agent to stick into all of your articles— which at some points with certain agent characters, doesn't make sense— and it's just… intriguing. +1.
Wow, that interview was wicked intense. I would dearly love to see this as a short film, the juxtaposition between the interview and the phone call would be downright chilling. Excellent work!