I really like this one. Do each of the churches represent a GOI? It seemed that way to me, with the GOC being the only one accepted and the Foundation being condemned along with the other groups.
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Yeah, I was reading it as the GOC being the only ones saved. Which reminds me of a bit Rowan Atkinson used to do in one of his stand-up acts. He was playing the devil and greeting all the varied masses to Hell. "Oh, by the way, the correct religion was… the Jews. It's right there in the Book: God's chosen people and all that."
Giving bearhugs to the unsuspecting since 1872.
I interpret the verses as corresponding to groups of interest as follows:
2. Chaos Insurgency
3. Serpent's Hand
4. Church of the Broken God
5. GoC
6. MC&D
7. The Factory
8. The Foundation
I quite enjoy this one, the tone is fantastic in conjunction with Clef's proposal. That said, there were a few word choices that I was wondering about, as well as a couple of typos.
6-You Sardinians… is inconsistent with the rest of the piece.
6-…Tired of his suffering… It feels off that it would be God who would be suffering here, rather then referencing it being all Heaven's suffering.
Just a stylistic choice, but maybe tired of this suffering would flow better?
6-…thin unholy trinity… Assuming thine was intended? Unless MC&D are all slender as well :)
7-…souls on many… Was of many intended? It could be an archaic use and Im just unfamiliar with it.
Cleaned up and clarified and I would gladly upvote. I especially love the corruption of the message at the last.
"suffering" does not mean here what you think it means.
Think less "agony" and more "thou shalt not suffer a witch to live".
Also, upvoted.
Does 5. reference Clef during his existence as Ukulele?
Project 001-Future Sight has been enacted and regarded as a success.
The Foundation used Future Sight!
The Foundation foresaw an attack!
SCP-001 took the attack!
It's super-effective!
IT IS A MYSERTY
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Shouldn't the date on this be redacted or replaced with black-out (e.g. 20██/██/██)? The end of the world is tomorrow, again.
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