This is my fifth SCP so far. I'm hoping this'll be the first to stick.
I'm interested to see what everyone thinks. If there's anything wrong with it (e.g. if its too similar to a pre-existing SCP), please let me know.
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I had an idea similar to this once, but I never acted on it. Anyways, I think the execution here is done well, so +1.
if your reading this your gay
(account deleted)There are numerous grammar errors and awkward wordings. The method by which the man transplants the organs isn't something that should be left unexplained. Do they just fly out of bodies like rockets? Flying Teleporting hearts, fingers, dicks?
I've specified the method of organ transplants as teleportation. Sorry, I just assumed it was obvious.
This is cute. Upvoted.
Living the dream, or dreaming the life?
Had my finger on the 'downvote' button until the addendum.
this started out feeling like it'd be not that great, cliche somehow….yet as i read on it became progressively more interesting. you've got a solid article here. good work. it could possibly have the tone tightened up a little, but otherwise i see no real problems.
The addendum was funny for me, because I literally spent the entire article thinking "yes, but what if something happens to the brain?"
And I got an answer after all. Go figure.
Bland, this might be a year late, but have my babies.
I like the implications of this. Makes me wonder how long this phenomena/being has really been around, though. After all, it claimed to be a man who died in a house fire, and if a fire is big enough, you might very well need new skin grafted on afterwards…
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