…a red 'eye' similar in appearance to that of the human retina.
Retina is part of an eye, not an eye. Suggested change:
…a red 'eye' similar in structure to that of a human eye.
Still, I rather like the tortured soul of the tiny little artist.
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I was going to say this isn't anomslous enough to be an SCP until:
"Image of SCP-753's containment area. SCP-753 appears to have shut down. Research Assistant ██████ is inspecting SCP-753. Closer analysis shows that Research Assistant ██████ lacks eyes. Notably, Research Assistant ██████ had not yet begun working with SCP-753 when the painting was created."
Oddly, that was the part I came to complain about. I feel like it detracts from the overall weirdness by tacking on an extra unnecessary anomalous effect for no reason other than to up the ante with no justification in universe.
This is a neat idea, and I've upvoted, but really you're trying far too hard to make it scary, author.
Fixed this, I wasn't really sure about it when I put it in, to be honest.
This is pretty neat. Also it just needs a hug. Also, it would be cool to have an image of one of those paintings (one of the few times an illustration would make sense).
if your reading this your gay
It wasn't interesting enough to earn an upvote.
Then I read the log.
This is kind of dull except for the death wish? expressed through the paintings. Other than that, it's kind of bland, but that's a nice enough feature for me to upvote. I'd slow the rate of painting generation, though.
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