Getting these minor stylistic things out of the way first: "On orders of ██" The only thing that I can see likely fitting in their is O5, and if that's what it's supposed to be it doesn't really need to be blacked out. I've seen O5-██ in a lot of articles if you still want to leave something censored. If it's not supposed to be O5, then ignore that. Also, on the "██-class restructuring event", I know there's no canon and all that, but I usually see CK-class restructuring. Either censor 'restructuring' or uncensor 'CK'.
I can't really understand the sentence "Found under conditions implied by remote viewing team SRV-04 Beta". How can something be implied by a team? Implied by something they discovered? The sentence just bugs me.
The rewrite overall seems sort of meh to me. SCP-003 never really grabbed me, and this hasn't really added enough to change that. I've always loved the "resulting by-product" line. I like Addendum 003-10 too. They serve as interesting hooks, but aren't enough on their own. I guess the big problem is that why this thing is an SCP still hasn't really been stated. It's a biological motherboard. Okay, that's weird, but only really anomalous item territory. Oh, but [DATA EXPUNGED] the resulting by-product. The end. Why we care about the thing generally can't be left expunged unless you want to be meta, and we already have SCP-014-J and SCP-579 for that. Those addendum desperately need to be expanded.
The last addendum is crappy. "[DATA EXPUNGED], and so we [DATA EXPUNGED]. From now on, if [DATA EXPUNGED], do [DATA EXPUNGED] to [DATA EXPUNGED]." There's nothing there.
