I hope that this article was an enjoyable read.
Many thanks to darkgreeny, DrChandra,
RegularSlambo, taylor_itkin does not match any existing user name, and
Sly161 for their brilliant feedback when this article was a draft/concept.
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CC BY-NC licenses aren't complient with the sites license, I'm afraid, so that one will have to be removed.
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Really? Alright. I'll get to work finding a replacement image.
Edit: Done. Is Pixabay's CC0-based license okay?
Thanks :)
EDIT: Yep that license is fine.
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So glad to see this on the main site.
I like the argument you added between Wexley and Lucy; really gives us a taste of the debate between the Neverlanders and the others. Being a toddler for fifteen years would really suck.
You've got SCP-XXXX littering the article but I enjoyed the Swiss Family Robinson/Lost In Space/Little Lamplight/Neverland environment. The bit with the leg was particularly good among the interviews. The world building was fun and always felt like it was serving a larger purpose. Very immersive. +1
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Corrected the XXXX thing — I really need to make a habit of double-checking that before I post.
Thank you!
This is a very cool scip and +1 for you. However, I kinda dislike the way Document 3082-01 is formatted, it looks kinda bare when collapsed.
Also,
[DRONE IS WATERPROOG]
I believe this is a typo, as the code for G and F are quite different and thus can't be the Foundation's error.
Good point about the first document. I've changed it so that all the non-higher clearance stuff is no longer inside collapsibles.
Also, "WATERPROOG" is now "WATERPROEF", because I still want a typo there, but you're right that mixing up G and F isn't very reasonable.
Thanks a bunch! :)
Yea, it looks neater now. However the images of the pitcher plant and morrison code is still somewhat out of place, as they are mentioned much later. Maybe move them to the top of the interviews where they are mentioned?
Just a suggestion.
Nah, I think I'd prefer those images to stay where they are. I appreciate the suggestion, though. :D
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I have been reading this draft for some time and the process it was written is pretty much a placid river. I really liked the idea and the parameters you situated to establishe a stable universe concept. …and a giant tree with a tree-village of children…well that's something we don't see everyday. The only concern I have is for the collapsibles, and I still stand for a much linear display instead of tabviews (as I'm mostly reading scips through mobile).
Overall, well done Rio! Take my upboat here will ya'!
+1 :D
Thanks, Greeny! :)
While I share your preference for collapsibles over tabview, this article with all its collapsed text open is long enough as it already is, tabview and all. XD Plus, I actually really like how the tabview makes the sections feel more like papers stacked on top of each other.
Glad you liked it!
Hehe, well, fair point. In that case, I've changed my mind. I have no other concerns now. XD
So, now I can finally expect an SCP-3082 art contest entry, huh? :P
Yup. :D The drawing's a work in progress at the moment, but I'll get it done.
Edit: Art contest submission now done. It can be viewed on my author page.
Excellent work Riolu, you did a great job melding together multiple plot threads while doing each justice. Between this and the apple pie skip you're really hitting your stride as an author.
Immersively built, some nice broad character-work, nothing is overplayed (except perhaps Wesley, but I can forgive that in context), it gets better as it goes on without ever wearing out its welcome, and the last line clinched my upvote. Good stuff.
Extremely good. Brilliant. In particular, I appreciate how the drip-feed of Morrison info throughout the -01 doc kept me intrigued while you went about explaining everything else; how you convincingly evoked the half-maturity of the anomaly's inhabitants through that well-written dialogue; the emotional punch and deep exploration of the central idea; how, when you needed to justify a plot device, you waited until a little while after introducing it to do so, which avoided anything seeming too contrived; how parsimoniously (in the sense of "efficiently impactful") you've structured and developed each section of writing; and the lovely twist at the end.
You clearly put a lot of thought into this, and it's paid off spectacularly. Well done.
Loved this in draft and absolutely love it here. Very well done. +1
This is really good, although it seems to have too much content before the narrative is revealed, and those terrible [DATA REDACTED] don't help, you could replace them with something that implies reality warping for example, or anything to show what Aria wanted to do after she left the village.
I know exactly what goes behind those redactions, but what's there reveals too much of the narrative too early, I'm afraid.
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