Hey Dex, Voct posed an interesting question earlier. What happens during an eclipse?
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Crap, he edited. What do…
I'm not editing this because I'm not sure how you want to phrase this, but I noticed it says Moon is Caucasian when upon further inspection of the photo he appears to be black
EDIT: Upon further further inspection he just has old-man skin
Interesting idea. Only complaint is that the text under the image looks kinda funny. Otherwise, an excellent twist on the lunar cycle.
I can only imagine that during an eclipse, something akin to a giant hole in his face appears that leads to nowhere.
During an eclipse, [DATA EXPUNGED]. This is considered safe, and does not cause long-term harm to the object.
I like the concept. However, I couldn't help but think that this expungement was put in place because the author didn't know what to put there. No vote.
I thought it was well-placed.
As long as you know what happens during a lunar eclipse, it leaves room for guessing but to a certain extent of the moon-face theme.
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Well, there are two types of eclipses.
A solar eclipse is one possibility, in which the moon temporarily passes in between the sun and the earth, blocking the light of the sun partially or totally.
A lunar eclipse is another variant of an eclipse in which the earth blocks the light to the moon. A lunar eclipse is sometimes referred to as a blood moon.
And that is what happens during an eclipse.
Can you send a link of the original picture? If you want, I can edit the face to make it lack all facial features, and look like it's covered in just plain skin. I could also do a varying of different features if you'd like.
Don't know why I like this one so much. Short, sweet, to the point. Enough substance to hook you and just enough to leave you hanging slightly, but not frustratingly so. The expunged is kind of annoying, as if the author couldn't think of anything to put there, but it's not deal breaking. Kinda wish there was An interview log though.
Edit; eyyy I got you your 100th + vote haha.
This one has good writing, effect, and provided photo, but I wish it had more personality. Most of the other Misters have some semblance of personality, this one doesn’t. Could be accomplished through an interview (since previous Misters were interviewed for info on the Doctor) or just more writing. +1 still though, from the aforementioned pros.
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