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Credit goes to Dexa for Mr. Moon and pretty much all the revision. I'd say a good 1/3 of this is just him. Also small thanks to Yoric for the "One Piece" idea and Ace for somehow finding a picture of an ordinary middle-aged black man on the internet.
NOTE: I think this article is fine as it is, but if you think you can make another Mister as listed, then PM me or Dexa a draft and we'll see.
It's a shame you redacted the manufacturer's name, the thematic possibilities for other SCPs that this guy might make are really interesting. Upvoted.
I've gotten several suggestion so far, such as Dr. Wondertainment, The Factory, a mix of the two, etc etc
I know, I know. No cannon, but I don't want to muck this up by making it aspiring to connect to the big SCP fabric.
We'll see…
14. Mr. Redd (discontinued)
The implications of this made me shiver.
I overall enjoyed this SCP, upvoted.
Oh, I get what Minmin is asking. Chameleon used to be Redd in the draft I showed him, until I switched Redd for Chameleon when Dex pointed out Redd's similarity to another SCP. But I didn't want to just get rid of Redd (he sparked this whole idea), so I added him to the list and added the Discontinued for some… subtle implications.
You have some unreplaced XXs in here and I think there are some misstypings (such as SCP-909-4's entry refering to him as SCP-909-3), all in all however I really like it. Upvoted.
This is clearly Doctor Wondertainment.
Ok, ok, fine. I'll do it.
Looks nice.
Just a recommendation: I've seen that most articles with multiple sub-designations don't collectively call them SCP-909-XX, but rather SCP-909-01 to SCP-909-04, or something like that. It doesn't really matter, but I usually associate "XX" with an unfinished draft, so…
You need to change out thsoe xx's.
also, what the hell is up with primary and secondary classifications?
Finally, these could easily be moved into four seperate SCPs. It's a whole lot of writing for one page.
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The primary classification is for "Dr. Wondertainment" - "the entity or entities creating or transporting a series of anomalous humanoids".
Some of these, like Hungry and Moon, would not survive on their own. And the list would have nowhere to go.
Except we are not currently containing Dr Wondertainment. That would be like having The Factory listed as an scp, and all factory items listed under it.
The list could go under one of the Misters, and, honestly, I just really feel this is way too much and too varied for one SCP.
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Hmmm… You make a good point, I'll change out the classifications. But it's a little too late to switch them all out and everyone else seems fine with it, so that's all I'll change.
Safe/euclid is not a classification. It's one or the other.
Also, the bit about anyone calling themselves 'Dr Wondertainment' That's like telling people to be on the lookout for 'Mister Peanut' It's a name that is obviously a brand name, not an actual person. I don't see the O5's putting out an APB for something that amounts to Ronald Mcdonald.
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And, again, I'm gonna suggest you separate these. Each of them are completely different SCPs, with completely different containment schemes, there is no reason to put them all under one number.
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Reasons:
1) Some of these would not stand by themselves
2) Simple explanation of all instances
3) The entries compliment each-other
4) Many series have already been done spreading across multiple pages
EDIT: If you have any more issues with this article, Bright, please PM me instead of going all Inception in the discussions page
This should be simple: Do not put multiple completely different SCPs on one page.
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Bright, this is already posted with a +16 and a general consensus of not sucking, I am not going to split this up over your opinion on how it is "too varied".
As for Wondertainment, coughnocannoncough. It is how it is written, and what you glean from it is your interpretation. If you think Dr. Wondertainment is a brand name, so be it, but there's no reason to not think of him as one individual who happens to choose that as his name.
kk?
EDIT: Hmm, can I redact that kk? It seems I git a little snarky. My formal apologies, Bright. But please, PM me if you have any more issues.
I think in this case it is acceptable, seeing as how it's a blanket classification for several "SCPs" as opposed to just one, while each "SCP" itself has a distinct classification.
That ruins the point of what we're trying to make Wondertainment be. As Dexa constantly told me while we were making this Dr. [Blank] is supposed to be a mad scientist who makes… things. Think of it like any stage name. If Jack Black were introducing himself to someone, he would call himself Jack black, not Thomas Black.
I disagree. Please split them into multiple SCPs.
And, how, since you seem to be using a name that's already in place in the site, is it your business to make it be something like that? Seriously, if you wanted to go for a mad scientist creating these things… Actually, going for that angle, makes this idea pretty bad. Making Dr. Wondertainment a brand name, makes it interesting. making it actually someones name makes it silly, even if it's just what they call themselves. If you wanted to make it a mad scientist, you shouldn't have used a name that was already in use on another SCP.
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NOTE: At this point Dr. ███████████ pressed a small button, creating a loud noise persisting for 5 seconds. SCP-MMM is seen to lose focus from the distraction.
SCP-909-02: Alright. (SCP-MMM accepts the pen and stationary and proceeds to write down the information given)
SCP-909-03 is aware of his actions while in this state and expresses extreme discomfort following the ingestion of denser materials. If SCP-909-03 is asleep he will wake up into this state. When in this state, SCP-909-03 will break down and ingest any matter within sight.
I'd change up the wording, you say "this state" three times in as many sentences.
That aside, I don't hate this.
I don't suppose you have any idea what the other monsters do?
02 seems fairly obvious for instance (one can only wonder why we haven't found him…) , but some seem harder to predict.
Mind you, this seems a touch ominous to me:
Find them all and become Mr. Collector!!
Exactly, that makes it somewhat dangerous to put all the 'Misters' under the supervision of a single person. And if they are all brought under Foundation control, they WOULD be incer the supervision of a single person; if they're all contained in the same facility, the facility director would be in charge of them, if they're in different areas, The totle of Mr. Collector, might end up goung to the Administrator.
