why can't i write serious scps any more. help me
also thanks to SpookyPizza for laughing at this. you can take all the blame since i didn't bother to get anyone else's opinion.
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God damn it Trennerdios! You should get the blame, not me!
Now people will think that I have an awful sense of humor!
Damn youuuuuuuuu take my upvote.
This, uh, yeah uh, it's all over the place. Yes, I laughed at several places, but it's stuffed with standard -J tropes. As a result, the humor is diluted, and it was a slog to read through, despite how short it was. I think I'm novoting.
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That's fair, and was probably my main concern. The interview itself is the biggest offender in that regard, but I tried to chalk it up to the exasperated attitude of Dr. Fattore, who clearly has been dealing with a neglected portion of a Foundation site.
(account deleted)I, uh, would also like to express my fondness for this particular opinion.
Similar vote.
Anything specific you would trim/remove/tighten up?
I feel like there's plenty of humour that could be found in boxes of sentient pasta (especially if they seemingly "die" when the box is empty), but as far as I can tell the entire joke here is that they speak with a bad Italian accent. Beyond that, I don't see any of the supposed incredible level of annoyance these things apparently cause. Or much else, unfortunately.
The joke is really supposed to be the level of neglect apparent in whatever area of the Foundation this SCP is housed in. The bad Italian accents are just window dressing. Perhaps I failed in that regard.
The way grandma wants it. The way grandma needs it.
This is a mess but I laughed. +1
Whether you like it or not, history is on our side. We will bury you!
I kept reading the 7 as an L, no wonder I couldn't figure out the number.
I dunno, this isn't bad, but I didn't laugh once as I read through it, so that's a downvote as far as I'm concerned. It seems to be the second -J parodying the beach of talking stones, though, so… I'm not sure we need two of those?
and now he doesn't seem to talka so gooda anymore.
Awesome.
The joke for me (other than being childishly amused at imagining things like "existential crisis" in a horrible stereotypical Italian accent) was how pissed the researcher was at everything. The dummy at the end, also great.
My only complaint would be using pesce as an adjective. Maybe only because it was 3 times in rapid succession.
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