SCP I've Been Working On

Summary:

Looking for a critical eye and advice.

SCP I've Been Working On

TroyL 06 Jul 2010 07:31

SCP for Review

I've been working on this one for a while (if you can't tell by the now filled number). I'm looking for advice on cleaning it up and making it tighter for posting on the main site.

Thanks!

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Re: SCP I've Been Working On

Dr Dan 06 Jul 2010 08:22

Reality Bending pplz what can make the world change with their mindz.

Sorry bru.

Although it is very nicely written.

Re: SCP I've Been Working On

Dr_Schubert 06 Jul 2010 08:44

Yeah, the guy above me has a point. But he's focusing on the wrong thing. As always, the cliches are too be avoided, but, for some reasoning this is particularly well written. The addition of the fact that the poor autistic chap really hasn't much control over it, and due to his mental condition, really doesn't mean to change things adds a delightful twist to it. I like it. Clean it up a bit though, I think it might be a better idea to put the schedule it follows before the art tests.

Re: SCP I've Been Working On

MalcolmMacLean 06 Jul 2010 13:06

I'm with the doctors; what we have here is a very well-written SCP… that we happen to have a few copies of already. I wouldn't know what to do with it. Can we get a senior member's opinion here, please?

Re: SCP I've Been Working On

AdminBright 06 Jul 2010 17:48

We've already got one.

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