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Flawed Arts

Flawed 01 Jul 2017 16:22

My art page :3 Last time I put this up, despite having decent ratings, I felt it was rushed and unsatisfactory, so I took it down. Now I'm more happy with them, I'm putting this up again :v

I can't afford a scanner yet, so I still have to use my crappy camera and slapped some random filters on :P

Maybe plz don't be too mean and upboat

Requests can be made here.

Re: Flawed Arts

FoldingPapers 03 Jul 2017 03:52

I must admit.

Anantasesha is maybe my favourite one

now to my nitpicks, just 'cause I'm Evil:

SCP-2794

This one, from one side by being the least complex one has the least things to critique. The head is maybe way too large and leg position will lead to balance problems as weight seems unevenly distributed

SCP-3000

As I already said this is maybe my favorite. use of color is interesting in well made, and the only thing I can see here is maybe the fact that some moments (the eye, the hand) are too blurred out. fix these and it's gonna be perfect =P

SCP-3007

This one, specifically on the one behind has weird head placement and the back is weirdly shaped. I can see what you were going for though, and otherwise the rest is well executed.
P.S. Maybe the hands look like claws. Just a bit.

SCP-3090

Part 1:
This one seems rather well balanced, executed and others, but I still have nitpicks:
The controller (is that what the litle thing in her hands is called? I suck at Englizh) seems rather flat, try impementing shapes like cones to add mass
her feet look… weird…
Y IS DA TV FALLING OFF?
the console seems a bit crushed… maybe use something straight (a book for example) to keep track of your lines. Even I do it =P

Part 2:
Now, subjectively speaking, this may be your best paper drawing - the attention to detail in the grappling hook is amazing, and the way it's made it goes on focus first. The position s rather good and looks well balanced. I can't say what you can do here to improve =P

SCP-3267

This one, too, is pretty well executed, but the way the book is held is weird. Despite her lack of hands, if she had ones they would be weirdly twisted for the purpose of the picture. I suggest you try changing the angle a bit to make it somewhat more fitting and not torture the poor woman…

SCP-3317

This one, while definitely good, may use a look from something like this

SCP-3872

This one, while mainly good, can be improved upon by some anatomy checks
like this one here
Hope that was helpful =P

If you want to see me torture myself, say, and I'll try to redraw ANY one of your drawings to see if I can do just as good =P

best case scenario I'm not laughed at into oblivion

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SpookyPizza 01 Jul 2017 18:19

Welp, that's one way to upvote a page twice.

Great work! Keep it up.

mlister 01 Jul 2017 21:07

Great to have this back.

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Decibelles 01 Jul 2017 21:51

Keep up the work :)

EDIT: Was probably vague. You have potential and you should keep working on it to improve and do better, but I don't think I'd upvote this as it stands right now. So I hope you continue to improve for the future <3

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Flawed 02 Jul 2017 00:09

Thanks for the advice :D

MaliceAforethought 08 Jul 2017 10:10

GOD DAMMIT Flawed. I am shocked and appalled that you would post art this good, and it's clearly designed to make me look worse in comparison.

Take my upvote and leave.

Flawed 08 Jul 2017 10:40

Wait what

Are you not the real MaliceAforethought?

The real one would be much better than me >_>

Zhange 16 Aug 2017 12:49

THAT NEW 3007 PIC IS SO BEAUTIFUL HOLY MEKHANE YALDABAOTH AND SCARLET KING AAAHHHH

Thank you so much for making that, and I'm glad that you liked my scip enough to draw it. On an related note, my idea for 3007 as an art comp entry is somewhat similar. I shall try to deviate from your awesome one if I have enough time to make it. :P

Flawed 16 Aug 2017 13:52

Glad you like it :D

But I thought you still have exams and the 001 painting? Seriously though, there are not many days left for the comp, so don't stress yourself out on rushing all of them for the deadline. Your art is amazing no matter if it's in the contest or not, so don't worry about it too much <3

Zhange 16 Aug 2017 18:54

Haha, thanks for the concern. I'll definitely get 001 finished and I'll try my best at 3007.

Good luck to you too!