Every SCP - Part 1 - SCP-2339 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page Every SCP - Part 1 - SCP-2339.

Confused about this series?

luckgandor 06 May 2017 18:44

Here's the intro if you haven't read it: http://www.scp-wiki.net/every-scp-a-mission-introduction

I also have an IRC chat and a blog for updates! Let me know if you want to join and I'll give you instructions/the link.

LilyFlower 06 May 2017 19:33

buzz buzz

This is v cute, +1

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luckgandor 06 May 2017 20:01

I'm so glad I did it justice, thank you!

(account deleted) 08 May 2017 01:22

Ehhh. I'm still getting good vibes from the relationship you're trying to cultivate between Eli and Dictator, and that's still turning out pretty decent, this cuts off pretty abruptly. A project of this scale is, necessarily, going to consist of at least a few choppy pieces, but as an individual article it doesn't feel like it stands up quite as good on its own as the series introduction. I'd genuinely like to see meatier bits than this, and more generally a better-developed emotional tone.