I like.
In the addendum, though - is that supposed to be "poor control", "fine control", "fine pore control"…? I guess the first, but "poor fine control" is decidedly ambiguous.
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This is really well-written, and disturbing. I like it.
if your reading this your gay
random discovery, and i love it to pieces. deserves better visibility, but i'd call this a nice easter egg for your average reader to run across.
Needs work for tone, especially near the end. I like the concept.
its strength when moving is about ████ N - comparable to that of an adult elephant at a dead run
So very scientific.
First, Newtons are units for measuring force, not "strength".
Second, even the force of Earth's gravity on an adult female elephant is about 24500 N.
Third, I believe you should energy (Joules) here. Aforementioned elephant at a dead run would have the kinetic energy of about 125 kJ.
Yeah, that and the rest of the tech talk kinda lost me.
an adult elephant at a dead run
Tone issues here.
to wrench common doors off their hinges
Tone issues here. Common, as opposed to royal doors? Wrenching doors off their hinges?
and "flow" through minute cracks
I don't think quotations are necessary here.
Other than that, it's a thing that kills you in an interesting way… not my thing. Downboat.
Living the dream, or dreaming the life?
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