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Tried hard to be spoopy, but did not really succeed. Nothing really spooped me that much. It was not horrible however.
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I quite liked this, despite it being a little overblown. It was the moment of recognition that worked best.
I presume that the anachronism between the opening ("Go-Pro", "bukkake") and the memories (Space Mountain, Jaws, Queen) are deliberate?
Given that the effect of the anomaly is to create recognition dating back to the 70s, it makes sense that's what happens.
Also, there are a couple of it's/its errors throughout the piece; do you need them fixed?
Feexed. Y si. Couple modern things juxtaposed against events from '75. Tried to make the tone a little lighthearted too, 'cuz it was going to get over the top pretty quickly.
Holy shit, this has always been one of my favorite skips, and now it has a gorgeous tale to go along with it.
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I think this tale actually made me like the scip it was based on more.
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Which scip is this based on?
It's based on SCP-2316.
Yea. The period of the final sentence is a link to that article. I was going to have the whole last line link, but I have no idea how to do that while keeping it formatted with teletype.
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