Liked it as a draft many moons ago and I like it now. +1
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There's a lot of fiction on this site.
Very little of it is actually a decent, compelling story.
This is one of em, great job Waxx.
I literally upvoted at the title, then tried to upvote again at the end.
Why did I leave if I must settle for the pretend Baconator.
I can't believe I read this, it's so fantastic.
That said, I literally have no idea what happened? I thought at first the incident was a hallucination or daydream, then I was thinking What did she shoot him with?, then he just left? What?
I wrote this last year so I'll admit I'm a little hazy on what I was trying to convey here. The answers to those questions are ambiguous on purpose.
Did she hit him? Did she miss? Yes.
Was it really orchestrated by Dmitri? Probably.
But I'm not telling much more.
Thanks for reading. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Shouldn't this be linked back to the Resurrection hub?
I love this too. I have to say though, the way Clef wrote Dmitri's speech was amazing.
To quote:
“I no jump without chute. I have done this once, was not fun. Break many bone.”
I guess it's more of a stylistic choice though.
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