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I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this. It's a perfectly fine concepts, but something about actually qualifying what takes place "inside" doesn't quite sit right with me.
Neutral vote.
Oh, wow, that was my comment.
In any case, this is a very enjoyable read, and I am always a fan of cross-tests that just go all sorts of haywire. Well done. +1.
This one echoes what I loved about 2719 by really illustrating the conceptual-level fuckery going on, and 184 was a nice dollop of physical-level fuckery that just feels right.
By the end the word inside didn't look real.
+1
This made me feel similarly as reading House of Leaves. This tale is uncomfortable and confusing and very, very good.
+1
There's a typo, i believe: The running continued for a long time. Doors were opened, rooms were crossed, halls were walked, but no exit. No exit. They was no out. Was there an outside? Did an outside even exist? There may not be, but Dr. Watkins kept going.
I would have fixed it, but i'm squeamish about editing to work of others.
Thanks! It's been a while since I've read House of Leaves, but I appreciate the comparison. And the typo's been fixed; thanks for pointing it out!
Certainly a more literal definition of "inside" than I expected but this was pulled off well enough regardless. You got my vote.
This surprisingly hurt my brain less than SCP-2719. Also that was surreal.
+1 (I do like 2719 though)
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