203 - I thought it was of an Actually Lucky Penny at first, but it seems to just make you crazy and die. Meh.
205 - Mirror that kills you if you stop looking at it….I dunno. I want to like it, but…I think the heartbeat thing has potential though…an overhaul to remove the 'heart stops' thing and expanding upon the internal views perhaps…could be quite useful if it doesn't kill you, for exploring internal structures without cutting something/someone open.
207 - ….It's just a diamond in a strange shape. Fix it or delete it. Tell us why anybody should CARE it's in a strange shape. As it is, it's merely an Anomalous Object at best, paperweight at worst.
211 - A guy in a coma/really really asleep. I'm thinking its a reference to something, but I'll be darned if I know what. I think removal.
214 - Mexican Staring Frog of Southern Sri-Lanka! I like this one, it's got a hint of Michigan J. Frog about it. Keeper. :)
219 - Ancient Robot…I think this could be helped by giving it a little bit of an aftereffect from the Theli Crisis and 808's control…perhaps a faintly glowing internal part, suggesting it's regaining power.
220 - The Cross…I think all this one needs is a little editing for clarity and grammar.
225 - My only real gripe with these is that nutrinos…aren't part of the electromagnetic spectrum. They're subatomic particles. A bit of an overhaul and these could be really interesting. As of now? They're Anomalous Objects at best.
227 - The silicon lifeform (Sandman?) I rather like this one, though I find it rather unlikely that in the thousands of years people have been in Nevada, nobody noticed this thing wandering around. It's mentioned that it's growing though…how fast? How old would that suggest it is? I think it just needs some editing to be great.
235 - It's more of a story than an SCP. It's apparently regular technology from the time it 'fell' from, the Foundation, once they got the data off of it, would probably try to reverse-engineer and copy it for use in their own devices. Expand on that, or move to the library.
236 - Bomb Mites. They're made of silicon and copper and gears and pulleys, yet they make copies of themselves out of *organic* material? After laying a METAL egg that unfolds into an exact copy of themselves? Ignoring the 'nearly subatomic' nature of their construction, that's…..pretty much completely impossible from the laws of physics as we know them…Editing is the key here though, as they are quite interesting…remove the mechanical aspect, make them totally biological.
241 - The cookbook…I kinda like this one too, but it could use some clarification on the allergies…the testing log seems to explain it, but it still doesn't quite make sense to me.
242 - The Self Reflection Mirror. I kinda like this one, but I think it should simply show an image/movie sorta thing of the subjects innermost desires and personality. Do some tests with various SCPs and researchers. Record the results. It'd be interesting to know what SCP-682's 'True Nature' is…its innermost personality. Maybe it adores hyper-kittens and super-string 15th dimensional rabbits and makes hyperspace teddy bears for orphans. This is one of the things where being indestructable actually works…if it was made on purpose, whoever did would've known some people would be rather..upset at what they saw.
243 - Viral mercury. Remove the stockpiling in case of attack, expand on its extra-terrestrial nature and how it converts the victims to more of itself.
245 - Elemental Cold. I like this one, too, actually. If it is the embodiment of 'cold' as it suggests, then it could take any form it wanted…though I think a gorilla is a little strange… It also suggests that not everything the Foundation contains *should* be contained…suggests that instead of making the world *better* and *safer*…they might actually be inadvertantly contributing to its doom.
246 - Doomsday Clock. A little creepy, but it could use some expansion. How does the foundation know that's what it's counting down to? What kind of tests have they performed? Is it just a timepiece, or will it *cause* the extinction, like a bomb's countdown timer?
247 - The Compass. Why doesn't the Foundation LET somebody find what it's guiding them to? Monitor their movement, with guards and everything..a full expedition. Or at least try to triangulate the destination?
248 - The Microwave. I really rather like this one, even if it is an Improver akin to 914. Keeper.
252 - The Gay Bomb. It needs to be clarified a little…it clearly isn't an explosive per se, but how much of the 'gay gas' is in there? Does it replenish itself? How?
254 - Already gone?
255 - The Character Editor. ……I'm mixed about this. It should be edited for clarity, grammar, etc, maybe expanded upon. Testing logs on certain safe humanoid SCPs to see if their powers can be removed, or granted to others.
258 - This one's gone too?
263 - A Malevolent jeopardy. Make the prizes better and remove the ability to cheat, and it'd be more interesting.
265 - Urban Legend Car. I like this one. Keep.
267 - Vorpal Sword. Less with the Jabberwocky stuff in the entry (Except for the 'unpublished' verses)…I believe also that the vorpal blade was more cleaver-like in the original…though I'm basing that off of half-remembered conversations about American McGee's 'Alice'.
270 - Gone! The heck?
273 - Are you already deleting these? It's barely been 30 hours!
279 - M:TG Card. I like it. An innocent purchase from another dimension…
282 - Gone.
286 - A De-evolution stone. Evlotion Does Not Work That Way. Still…somewhat interesting.
287 - Gone.
292 - Time Rewinding Egg Timer. Could use some clarification, but it's not bad.
293 - ….I like this one a lot. It's creepy as all get-out, but I'd think the Foundation would be a bit more gung-ho to contain or at least discover the form of, an unfettered keter-level threat…
296 - The Judge. Very, very nice…Keeper.
EDIT: Geez, I was reviewing and typing while the culling was happening! Dangit, you work too damn fast!
