Was not, in any way, expecting this to involve a SCP, very nice job!
This… this is great. It's really scary, it's really tense, and the ending is fantastic. I don't know how it was before the rewrite, but it's wonderful now.
Absolutely chilling.
Piffy is an SCP Foundation Moderator, Lv. 9001 Squishy Wizard, and Knight of the Red Pen.
Excellent work.
if your reading this your gay
You might want to put in a section break before the last two paragraphs. Also, you don't really need the author's note.
And, this isn't bad.
The Author's note is so people aren't like "Are you leeching rating from an old page?!"
The Author's note is so people aren't like "Are you leeching rating from an old page?!"
…Huh? It was only at, what, +3? +4? And it's a rewrite of the same exact thing. Huh?
It was at +1. If it wasn't the same story, it would be leeching, hence putting down that it is the same story. Most people have never read the original!
What.
Compare versions is right there and besides you coulda just posted a comment on the discussion page about it, rather than awkwardly inserting it into the piece. :P
Glad to see it was all a delusion in the end. I started to feel bad for Stephen. Fortunately, delusional children feel no pain.
At the risk of sounding lost and confused… SCP-845 is a liquid polecat. Did that replace what used to be there?
Hey, sorry if this is a necro-response, but I feel like you deserved an answer.
SCP-845 used to be a door that makes you crazy. It was pretty rightfully downvoted to oblivion, and deleted.
I wrote this tale back before that happened, and a much better 845 has taken the place. I just haven't edited the story at all.
Thanks!