My classiccon entry! Thanks to Rustyboltz,
vilsolad,
fivebbbbb,
hilaom, and
Civil Western for reading this in a sandbox.
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Your entry gave gave me a lot of nostalgia, reading it really reminded me of when I first started getting into SCP, amazing work!
Gotta say, this one was surprisingly charming to me. It's an absolutely gruesome fate for a person — which says something about the chickens forced to undergo it. I agree with Merehrab that it really does feel like a classic Series 1 article in its purest state. While I think the metaphor could be a little more subtle, I appreciate that the article isn't afraid to make a point.
I genuinely really like this one, this is like a surprisingly good Series I article that you stumble upon randomly and leave with a smile because of how good it would be for that time, great work, underrated as hell
I'm not particularly 'wowed' by this one, but I think it's pretty fun. The picture is really charming, particularly. I don't have a lot to say, sadly, it's pretty cute and has a nice little fucked up twist.
+1
not very subtle, but something something subtlety something something cowards.
A particularly unsubtle article that wears its metaphor upon its sleeve, but nonetheless, the anomaly itself is novel and intriguing. I think the clinical tone might benefit from a slight touch-up to increase the impact those lines have upon the audience. Also, a few sentences reference "subjects" without ever defining what a subject is in reference to the anomaly.
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