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Baby Not on Board

A Random Day 15 Apr 2016 20:01

I haven't written an actual SCP in half a year. This is me trying to get back in the saddle with some actual spooky nonsense. Inspired by a Two-Sentence Horror post I made, my own sordid attempts at writing SCPs, and the gruesome tale of one Mrs. Mary Toft.

Thanks to DrGrym, hornetcorset, Jacob Conwell, Jenfwoosh, minmin, TheDuckman, TwistedGears,shaggydredlocks, Some_Potato, and Wils for feedback.

See more of my work on my author page!

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Libraryseraph 15 Apr 2016 20:05

I like this. There are some implications that don't really go anywhere and don't add to the scp but this is a crawling ball of baby organs you can literally never forget and that's creative and horrifying in the best way

Jacob Conwell 15 Apr 2016 20:13

So this is a very creepy skip with a very old school feel to it. Its got some nice body horror going for it, and is short, sweet, and to the point.

+1.

Ambiguous Anti 15 Apr 2016 20:16

This reminds me of an actual phenomenon where the mother's fetus just straight up disappears.

What I like about this is that it does leave room for interpretation and, moreover, questioning! Why could this be happening more frequently I wonder? Or, more appropriately, why is it happening at all? It truly is an anomaly- one that seems to be difficult if not impossible to stop in reality and in memory. Regardless, I like the way it's written. +1

Also it's nice to know a fun thread of mine got someone to come up with their own cool concept :)

FUUUUU

(account deleted) 15 Apr 2016 20:38

What's the name of that movie where the guy can travel through time and disappears from his mom's womb into the past, making her think she miscarried? There's more to it, but I can't remember…
Was it looper?

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TyGently 15 Apr 2016 21:18

That was not Looper.

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Taffeta 16 Apr 2016 01:16

Believe it's The Butterfly Effect.

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Taktuk 16 Apr 2016 01:31

Yes. The Butterfly Effect, specifically the director's cut.

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Hawkin 16 Apr 2016 02:42

<pedant>He didn't disappear, he strangled himself with the umbilical cord.</pedant>

ratking666 15 Apr 2016 20:33

This was pretty gross but I liked it! 1+

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TL333s 15 Apr 2016 23:04

High on the body-horror scale, but this line

including its cries and crawling gait.

feels more like bad creepypasta.

A Random Day 15 Apr 2016 23:38

Reworked the line to make it less creepy pasta.

Wils 15 Apr 2016 23:05

Easily +1able, despite - yet again - a complete absence of rabid glowing monkeys in a mainlist scip.

hi im stel 15 Apr 2016 23:28

will be automatically alerted to investigate and, if necessary, recover instances of SCP-2910-1.

Do you mean 2910-A? A 2910-1 isn't mentioned anywhere else in the article other than the document in the procedures.

Scorpion451 15 Apr 2016 23:37

Anything that makes me sit here this long processing what I just read gets an upvote.

Taktuk 16 Apr 2016 01:33

Sweet Pelor, this was disturbing. The birthdate is within spitting distance of my own, too.

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