SCP-8359 / Discussion

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CompleteIndie 31 Mar 2024 22:30

WE SEND OUR SIGNALS
THRU THEIR DOMAIN
DID WE REALLY THINK
THEY WOULDN'T ADD THEIR OWN

SCP-8359, 3AM, written by JakdragonX and finished by me! As part of the Deer College Spring Cleaning, where, in part, users of the SCP community could swap unfinished articles for completion, this article stood out to me, and so I decided to finish it. The main things was needed a really punchy conclusion, and a bit more personality on X's bones, so… I did that, and I made the image that is attached in the embed.

The truth is out there if you know where you look.
-Violet of CompleteIndie

Pedantique 31 Mar 2024 23:20

This execution of the Foundation getting doxxed reads a bit too straightforward for me. It builds toward the natural conclusion without taking any real detours or examining details/characters/etc. in depth along the way, so I didn't feel invested by the end (and as a result, wasn't very affected by it). I think it needs something extra.

Decent, but...

A Brick In A Sock 01 Apr 2024 02:23

This a creative, well-constructed SCP article with an interesting premise and even some genuine notes of horror and suspense…

…but as much as I want to, I can't upvote this. It feels incomplete, the conclusion reached too quickly without complication; there's no real character exploration, no discussion of the consequences, and no revelation as to how this thing really works.

It just too vague to be satisfying.

Khaim 21 Apr 2024 23:41

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You forgot to finish this sentence.

user2932389874 16 Jun 2024 13:17

It's nice to see a few more Parawatch-esque anomalies coming out recently. As someone who personally enjoys shorter SCPs, this one was fun to read.

Dr Imity 12 Jul 2024 14:13

This is a really good and well executed concept but I don't feel like it goes anywhere? It feels like it keeps escalating and hooking you until it just abruptly stops.

Still really good though.