SCP-7543-Telescope to another universe Critique (1600 words)

Summary:

A telescope that is able to view an alternate reality.

SCP-7543 Critique

Ironpaw 19 Sep 2023 03:41

https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/scp-7543
Sandbox link

SCP-7543 is currently up on the main site with mixed reviews, so I want help to make the finishing touches into turning it into a truly good SCP.

1-Fixing any grammatical issues
2-Ironing out dialogue
3-Generally anything that improves the story

Last edited on 19 Sep 2023 21:34 by Ironpaw Show more

Critique Team - Junior Staff Post

Zoobeeny 21 Sep 2023 15:27

Noting here that this has been posted to the main site at SCP-7543.

Re: Critique Team - Junior Staff Post

Ironpaw 21 Sep 2023 20:28

Hey, I've had quite a few people review my SCP, and tell me that it's ready to be posted, but it doesn't do too well. I would like help from another professional critter to take a look at it.