I Didn't Forget Pt 8: Theodore North
Here is a link to my sandbox, containing part 8 of my tale series I Didn't Forget. As a late entry into an ongoing series, it assumes you have read all the previous parts, links to which can be found on my author page. It's a long-form mystery series about a civilian who stumbles across the anomalous world when his brother is taken by the Foundation.
One particular question of concern for me in receiving feedback on this piece is whether the emotional payoff here is satisfying. Did the final scene succeed at evoking feelings from you? Did both Jerry and Theo's side of the argument seem sensibly human? Are you excited to see where things go from here?
